that was an amazing story! It was very deep, yet just perfect enough to enjoy and understand the story. You have my kudos friend. :)

Greta fic, hot. Nathan and Audrey are amazing together, they're the only reason i watch the show. I hope you write more for this couple. :D

Nicely done

Great fic. I really enjoyed to read what wss going on in Nathans mind.

Oh, you wrote it before he knew he could feel her, right? Awesome story! I love the little pieces of information about his routine and the part of her body that he likes the most. Just incredible. I hope that you still watch the show and write more about this couple. They're just epic!
Anyways, thank you for writing and sharing!

This is beautiful. Intimate and Perfect and just how i'd like to Think of them in the middle of the night. :) hope you write more pieces especially since I think s2 has been so good so far. Would love to read fic

He thought maybe cold was like the dark, thick and tangible, coating everything until you closed your eyes so that the blindness was voluntary.

Nathan had spent his entire life constructing elaborate metaphors to describe sensations that he couldn't have, as if by putting words to the loss he could control the grief he felt

Seriously brilliant writing and insight into Nathan. A perceptive and well written take on their physical relationship. Incredible descriptions, seemingly effortless!

Good story

Nice job! Very good insight into Nathan's character. I wish they had been able to get farther into the relationship in the series but i think this is what it wouldve been like :)

I really liked this! Simple and very sensual. I loved how you thought about how Nathan would have constructed ideas surrounding feeling nature and light really brilliant one shot! :D

Hi,

What a wonderful story. I love the way you describe their intamacy it seems so THEM. A great lead in with the "hollow just under her hip bone where he could press his thumb" I was hooked from there. Guese Im a sucker for sexy stories and lately Nathan and Audrey sexy stories. Thanks for sharing. I will be watching and hoping you will do more.

ROLL TIDE!

Lea

I loved it! :)

Very sweet story! :-)

~Mich

I don't know how I haven't written a review for this yet, but I love it. HOT and in character and just awesome.

BRILLIANT! ;)