OMG update or at least give us a reason as to why you won't~
We just wanna make sure our favorite fanfiction author is Okay~
Peace~
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Wow! This fic is amazingly well written! I had a bit of troube imagining Deidara insecure because he doesn't care about anything as a character, but your descriptions made it easy! That's a true talent~

i remember following this story when you were still on chapter 5. its been 4 years, i hope you look back and will one day update

DAMN CLIFFHANGERS

Oh my god ,I swear this was based off of my life ,,y friend sent it to me ,tho it made me cry remembering everything I couldn't stop reading it ,it's wonderful ,please add

This is a well written story. You have captured everything about an eating disorder. What runs through Deis mind and all the Pro-Ana stuff is excatly what it is like. Please update soon.

aaaahhh. why did you have to stop there? I really wish you would have continued! I have yet to see another story like this, and I'm glad you put it up, I want to know the ending though ,

That was so intense. Great job on the fic, though. Just.. wow.

Good start!

This story is fantastic...it's so sad, but it's so well written and it had me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what will happen next
Keep up the amazing work! :) xx

This is a beautiful story. It's scary, holds you in and binds you and makes you feel. (At least that's what it did to me...)I have no constructive criticism to add.
I want more chapters! It's killing me to have to stop reading here! Please finish it!

beautiful, enthralling, capturing. your story is now in my favorites list.

complete stranger here *waves* and im a lil' worried -not to sound creepy or anything just an human thing - do you have this eating disorder? because the way you describe Deidara's situation sounds like you know, If you do, I don't mean to upset you or anything but do remember that by hurting yourself you are hurting someone else. Great story keep it up. You have a wonderful talent use it to it to it's fullest extent.

Oh God... ._. I don't really know what to say.

It's horrible. Awful. Depressing. Don't get me wrong, you write very well. But the whole thing with Deidaras Eating Disorder is so realistic. I've already read a few stories (but in other fandoms) about the same topic, but it was never like this. And when Deidara tried to kill himself I sometimes had to stop reading. I've read soo many FFs, in which some kid cuts open his/her wrists, and there are pools of blood - yes, well. And I've read it without blinking.

Maybe you somehow know what I want to say. "Lovely" is... deeper. Kind of.

But to be honest, in the last few chapters maybe there was a little bit too much drama. I mean - before it was Deidara's ED and Kakuzu being an (what did Deidara say?) piece of filth. And now - Sasori? Tobi? I think I would've liked it better if the focus would've stayed on Deidara. But let's see how this is going to develop.

I want to hug Hidan... ._. and Tobi. And Dei.

-is about to cry- Poor Tobi. Good, this story is really depressing. But I still really want to know what is going to happen next so please UPDATE as soon as possible _