It is beautiful, I love it!

Thank you.

A french reader ;)

That was so beautiful...I have to admit that I was skeptical when you said that there wasn't going to be any dialog, but I don't think this moment needed it, and I think dialog would've been superfluous, and a distraction from the raw humanity that came across in this moment. Fabulous job!

I loved this. Especially when I have the entire scene visualized in my head from that scene we got to see during the sneak peak.

Definitely a great take on it.

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'And they clung to one-and-other, life vests in the ocean of sorrow that threatened to swallow them.' possibly the one of the best written lines ever. i loved your story!

Beautiful story, but some more dialogue could have helped explore the emotions of the characters.

That was amazing. D Your detail is phenomenal! I am blown away. Please tell me that you write more than fanfiction.

That was lovely. Thank you for writing this. Very in character and believable. :) RB

Fantastic! I loved that there was no dialog because really...what can they say at this moment? There are no words. You did a fantastic job and I'd love to see you continue it, or perhaps write about the funeral?

Very nice. I was also thinking about that scene and I love how you portrayed it.

Very beautifully written. I love this scene and hope they handle it the wonderful way you did for the movie.

That was really good, really sweet. I could really feel the emotion.

xxx

Very beautifully written.

OMG words fail me for this FF. First off I LOVE this clip of R/Hr- it goes to show the deep love these 2 have for each other. The way he is holding on tightly to her hand and her with her own hand wrapped around his tightly as well. My fav part of this scene though has to be their heads bent down and touching.

The way you have the scene end in your FF is just beautiful...hope that it could be similar in the movie to what ya wrote. As always awesome job.