The best story I ever had the pleasure of reading!

First person perspective completely ruins the story.

I really loved the story, but the ending feels really off. Link didn't even keep his promise from the first chapters, as Midna left. With all those kisses and cuddles, I would rather make a happy ending with those two together, even if it doesn't follow the real story, don't you think?

Nevertheless, your writing is really good, so keep it up! :)

I am really liking this...hope you write more. Plus hi Link and Midna!

Didn't exactly love the ending of the story, but it was great none the less. I saw a few hints of Naruto earlier on in this chapter... I see what you did there (unless you didn't do it on purpose). Was listening to Ganondorf's Battle Theme from Twilight Princess to make that last battle scene more realistic (if you know what I mean).

I think you did good for your first time writing, my first attempt at fanfiction was ABSOLUTLY abysmal. I like to think I am worlds better now, oh yah and great chapter.

Please, please don't make link say "foo" in the A/N. Just... Just no. Link wouldn't say that and I can tell just how he acts in all the Zelda games. Besides that the story is great for being only one chapter. Keep it up.

Loved the story man

Just realized how fucking long this fic is.

I've literally even crying for the past four or five chapters... This may tie as first place for the f****ing depressing story in history of all f***ing depressing stories in history. I can't wait to read the next story and will not hesitate to give it 10000/10 'cause I loved it that much. I very much so liked Ashei being Zelda's lover and being the new bearer of the Triforce, Link being Zelda's brother and what made my interest spike in this story; Midna and Link being together. I applaud you, my fair sir, and give my thanks for this wonderful story.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE END OH MYG OD

SEQUEL. I NEED A SEQUEL. PLS.

ASHEI AND LINK ARE SO PERFECT TOGETHER AUGH MY HEARTSTRINGS WOW

but

WHEN
WHEN LINK SAW MIDNA ALIVE AND SHE WAS ALL "DID IFUCKING STUTTER SAY SOMETHING U FOOL" AND THEN SHE'S LIKE "am so i so beautiful that you've no words left?"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH HE SMILED HAHAHAHAHAHAH I CRIED

anyways wow long ride and it's already over. it feels like years and then again it feels like it's just begun.

on a side note, i love how shikamaru came to get me (even though my favorite character from naruto is neji omg)
OH I AM ACTUALLY A POKEMON TRAINER TOO BTW JUST THOUGHT YOU SHOULD BE AWARE.
YOU KNOW.
FOR THE SEQUEL.

BECAUSE THERE'S GOING TO BE A SEQUEL, RIGHT?

Anyways, as always, job well done. this is it. you did it, my friend. I can honestly say i'm proud to be been here from the beginning (though because of certain circumstances, i could not always review sighs).

You really are a wonderful writer and a great friend. Please keep it up.

xo (alice)

I am very disappointed with the last two chapters. I can live with Zelda dying but Midna just leaving though she and Link are in love felt empty and pointless. Much of this story felt unrealistic but that ending really took the cake. You were doing something right if I read this far but I feel like you wasted a lot of potential.

well that sucked the ending but it was good. The chapter as a whole was good but Midna leaving that really sucked. Bu ti should have seen it coming anyway i look forward to the sequel.
Draco122

Wow. I finally caught up and it's over . Well I guess this is "bye for now and can't wait to see you again". Maybe I'll be a little more timely on the next go-around.

Ill be eating donuts and playing Tales of the Abyss thank you!. And of course ill be following the sequel ya idiot. HURRY UP AND WRITE IT! xD