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   T-tawny chapter 1 . 7/17/2016 Can't say I know the movie quote, can however say how much I loved this. It's just soso good! |
| justcallmehermione chapter 1 . 7/16/2013 I've wanted to read a Smellershot first time fic for a super long time, but I never actually went to look for one. Then, when I'm not even looking I find this gem and squeal in delight! Thank you so much for this! It was great :) |
| HERBIVORE MUNCH chapter 1 . 7/9/2013 This was really sweet. It was my first SmellerShot and I really enjoyed it. I would've clarified that it was a lemon though. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 You do know that Longshot was the one to kill Jet, right? Re-watch the episode. |
| InfiniteShipper chapter 1 . 6/21/2013 This was great, you captured their relationship PERFECTLY! The quote was from The Cutting Edge, that's one of my favorite movies! |
| RandomHumanOnEarth chapter 1 . 12/11/2012 I adore this couple, but there are never enough stories. Great job. |
| ANIMELOVEDOLL chapter 1 . 9/23/2012 OH GOSH! I loved it. I like the whole sense of security that you portray around these two characters. It gives them more depth that ATLAB didn't. Everyone knows they were meant to be. Thanks for the great story. -Love morgan. |
| Reglen chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 Oooh man! I have so many feelings right now. I almost cried a few times. This has got to be one of the best Smellerbee/Longshot fanfictions I have ever read. I love your writing. Keep on being great! |
| Sunny chapter 1 . 9/30/2011 Is the movie line about her bleeding? I know they say that in "My Girl" |
| B. Romes chapter 1 . 8/24/2011 This has got to be one of the best stories I've read on fanfiction, like seriously. I actually thought she was pregnant when she got sick, and I was hoping for it too. But still, it was great! GOOD JOB! |
| Sonya Rivers chapter 1 . 8/17/2011 Good story! Thanks for writing. And I wish I knew the line, but I don't. Meh. No tea for me. |
| Amaranth chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 OHHHHH, DO ANOTHER ONE! I LOVED this one-shot! It's amazing, and it covers all the points. Well written, too. IDK what another fanfic about Longshot and Smellerbee could be, but you write like a very intelligent person, so if you do do another one, I'm sure it'll be as good as this one. Maybe you could do a follow-up, call it "Second" or something. Just a little thought to think on- but seriously, thanks for a wonderful story. There just isn't enough of this pairing. |
| Gentlewolf chapter 1 . 2/8/2011 This was amazing! Thanks to a friend, I've really become hooked on these two. |
| Rosawyn chapter 1 . 2/7/2011 I really, really like this. :) lol her nearly breaking his nose. |
| JasmineDragon22 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010 does she die? |
