please don't sulk ... keep on writing... i'm so sorry i take too much time to write this crappy review... what i can say... your story is this interesting because of your personality is too! what a shame if a talent like this can't get bigger... please continue... embrace your dream and protect your honor (yes i can say that too even i'm not angeal)

you may not know who i am... or maybe you know (that stupid anon that love you, of course- no, i mean you deserve much love, but not from disgusting me) well, don't care about my story, just care about this story! you don't know how much i re-read this story... (maybe i'll get obsessed?) if there's a good timing, i'll pm you so maybe we can talk ... A LOT. i feel bad (yes i'm not nice enough to you. Sweet Honey Ice Tea! - errr... get it?)... um... RETREAT! for now (for me, but for you, wake up from hiatus, ok?) again - I LOVE YOU (fangirling) maybe this is my trademark for now...

uuuuuuggghhhh maybe this is lame (my comment) but you NEED to continue. well yes i'm too chicken to get out from my anon state (or sign in) but i just fall in love with ff and found your story here... it's like every time i online, i'll check this story for continuation. i don't care what you gonna do with story because i'll know it'll turn out AWESOME. just get up from your lazy ass (what the heck, i'm sorry for being a mean bitch) aggggghhhhhh i want to beg you but my ego hesitate (and sorry for my bad english, i'm just my life pathetic right now- i don't wanna talk about it) whatever, YOU"RE A VERY MESMERIZING AUTHOR i almost cried.

and if i can get out from the abyss that i'm in it now, i'll comment other chapters... augh, don't feel bad because of me, i really deserved it. i've been running from my luck, so foolish but this story might make it come back. you don't even need to understand my ramblings... I LOVE YOU! (fangirling)

This is really good! I anticipate your next update!

update please

Very nice story. Hope you will update this

ok..just read all 16 chapters in one go, i love it :D

please update soon

I loved this story so much! I read it over and over again! I really liked zack and his personality. Good job!

I really like it when Zack gets all sweet with Aerith. I love that trait that you gave to Zack. I hope to see more sweet moments of them together teehee~ I can't wait for your next chapter! This was really short :

Oh how nice you will keep writing right. Okay then. Hey if you are interested in ZackXAerith why don't you read some of my fanfic's there a rated M one called Under the Ray's of Light. Best be warned though thank you.

Yeah it was pretty short. There were some spelling errors.

But hey I'm just dying to find out what will happen in the next chapter. Keep writing. 3

Great story!

Its about time someone made a worth while story about characters that actually do like eachother

My first time reading about this pairing together

You've done a good job with keeping the character in character lol

I'm like to read more from you with this story and I'll be checking out others you've written. Take care and stay healthy

Knew there was something wrong when I began reading this chapter. XD

C-A