Absolutely love the story kinda curious though the monster at the beginning sounds like how Elias Ainsworth looks in the achient magus bride if so that is amazing.

One of the greatest Inuyasha stories I've ever read!

WRITE MORE DAMN IT

Woah, is it me or are these getting shorter?

I think 'insert name here' is a good one. It's got nice variety.

CHAPTER 4 REVIEW!
Sesshy seems a bit OOC only because of his dialogue. His actions are good, dialogue is a bit too casual.

Woah, that was rather out there fast. 'can't see my dad? okay, train me! won't train me? I'll train myself! oh, you will? let's go!' Damn, she just fainted a few hours ago! xD

This was fast paced and seemed to be a last minute plot filler chappie, but it's enoyable :)

P.S Spelling/Grammar ;D

I think Ayaga still works for the son's name. Tehe.

CHAPTER THREE REVIEW!
No! No writing with a fever! xD I could tell the difference in your writing in this one because everything seemed rather rushed thus it didn't flow as awesome as it could have. And there was a lot of details that could have been included but you avoided. Shame on using authors note in the middle of the story. Shame xD Its okay, I know you know better now. Still a good chappie though because I was able to react.

HAH! She finally fainted. I say I called that one. And woah, man, that jewel needs to lay off and die. Now complications and angst will ensue. Its like a teenager, that jewel.

Its interesting to see Rin older :D I'm curious on how you'll write her personality. Shippo is just out of whack so I don't know what to expect. Sesshy is awesome and Jaken is silly. All in all, you know what you did X3

(pssst, Spelling and Grammar)

Short chappie? Then quick review!

CHAPTER THREE REACTION TIME!
Wrap him up, I'll take two! Kai is such a sweetie takin' stuff in stride.
After everything is revealed: Cue Izayoi fainting
GRAMPS IS STILL ALIVE?! I think this proves gramps is a demon or something cause...woah
D'aww, poor bitter and sad Sota. Wow, Inu. Way to come off as a grief stricken dick. They're both slightly in the bad though.
hahaha, mom still goes on auto pilot to cook and pack. That's cute.
Oh, well, bye Kai. Way to not seem strange and aloof by walking away like it's nothing.
BACK TO THE PAST!
Spelling/Grammar (I will never stop mentioning this xD )

Yaay! You included the awkward "Here's my child, sorry about the mrs, good day good day". Short but satisfying :) Let's see what time period she ends up.

Koga and Iyame's son should be naammeed... Kome! or Iyaga! I dunno, I just combined their names xD

CHAPTER 2 REACTION TIME!
HAH! The teacher just blatantly points out the obvious. I think what's more depressing is everyone's reaction.
Spell check/ little grammar checks
Still no purpose for the POV changes
I don't know why I thought Kai was a girl for a second (I must have mixed up the names) so I thought there was a lesbian scene in here xD whoops. I realized my error a second later. Anyway, gaaassp, those jerky friends!
After Kai's POV: Oh wait, only Michiru is a jerk. GASP! That's B**tch! Izayoi needs to go feudal era on her arse cause nuh uh. That's messed up to tear up a dead mama's storybook.
YES! Pow, right in the kisser.
I kinda wanted to see the conversation between 'I killed my wife/ your sister; here's a baby' Maaybe, later in the story? ;D

Good chapter! The pacing was pretty on the mark and I'm enjoying the OCs. Which I don't do so often. You're doin' it right, gurl. And its a good cliffy too because I wanna know how fugly she is. Or so super beautiful that everyone was scared.

Oh wow, finally I get to reviewing your stories!
Albeit a super ooold one but I don't know other anime fandoms well _;

Yes, we all wished we owned Inuyasha because that ending just...ooo, the simmering anger and disappointment. Seen from lightyears away, that ending.

So here were my thoughts and reactions as I was reading through CHP 1:
-The opening line opened up my 'reading children's fairytale' head voice. Which is funny in a sense but something to be aware of as well. In other words, the syntax in most of the chapter was simplistic but good enough that I didn't want to close the browser (like 7 out of 10 good) So working on finding your style and voice in writing would make your fics FANTASTIC CRAZY AWESOME. (I need to read a recent fic so I can contradict myself and say how much you've improved xD I'm sure you have)
-POV changes were unnecessary but I completely see why you wanted to make them. But you could have accomplished the same thing in third person.
- When Inuyasha finds Kagome: Wooow, Inuyasha you dumb shit. Can't you smell the blood on her? Seriously, she's dying! I've never been the biggest fan of Inuyasha when he's dumb xD
-Daaamn, that baby gonna be small since she was born two months ahead.
-"Maybe it was his love for his brother" MAYBE IT WAS HIS LOVE FOR KAGOME?! (hehe, KagSes shipper fantasies xD)
-Wow, that sucks to be Inuyasha at the end. "Your sister, slash my wife, is dead. I let her fight a demon while she was preggers. Oops? I'm gonna dump our baby here now. See ya." Seriously, I won't be surprised if he commits suicide from guilt.
-TyposTyposTyposTypos. Guuurl, I don't care you don't care. Just find a beta slave and get it fixed! xD

Overall, GOOD STUFF :D I actually find it interesting you killed Kagome because that's realistic. I know Kags has some damn good luck but her story is done and she was fighting preggers, she can die. Sesshy having emotions is interesting cause people next to never do that. They fear OOC-ness. But if given a good reason or backstory, it works. I'm unsure if it works here yet but we shall see o.o

That was an amazing story! I hope you don't mind but I have a story with the same title. Anyway that was great!

Hi I know this is like 2 years old. But I'm just wondering why you didnt get Sesshomaru to bring back Kagome with Tenseiga. Well I guess the story would have gone a different direction then eh?
Anyhow this is a great story and can't wait to read more!

cool story

YAY! GREAT STORY BY THE WAY PLEASE TELL ME IF UR DONE WITH THE SEQUEL! BELOOKING FORWARD TO IT D

OMG I WAS THINKIUNG THE SAME THIONG HE ACTS EXACTLY LIKE MIROKU but mirokus a bit more of a perv

its Kirara just so you no GREAT STROY SO FAr!

Hmm ? why does Inuyahsa show up less, and less in ur stroy? Shouldn't he be in it more? Glad to hear ur not completely ending the story on to the sequel!