Love it! Thank you for sharing!

Still waiting for updates great great job long time

And I was giggling uncontrollably for that last paragraph. That was so perfect. Just. *shuddering inhale*

Similar to my last review, think that may have been the best Sho-confession I've read. I think you got the balance between his arrogance and his need for Kyoko perfect. Thanks again for sharing!

That might be the best bit of Ren/Kyoko fluff I've read, because it wasn't sappy and was therefore believable.

Thanks for sharing!

Omg, this chapter. This. Chapter. It was PERFECT! Everyone was IC and went along with the original storyline.

This story was exactly how I picture Sho confessing to Kyoko and her response and his selfishness, just everything was perfect to me. The honesty, angst, pain, anxiety, nervousness, everything, omg. I feel bad for Sho, but if this happens to him, I'll be happy. I want Kyoko to tell Sho off, but I also want her to feel bad about it, the exact way you portrayed it in this story. Omg I just really really love this story. My all time favorite ShoxKyoko fanfic.

Thank you. You're an amazing writer.

You're one hell of a writer.

The whole, "I'll be nice." Had my cracking up laughing! Such a funny way to try and get her back. Good Job keeping it in character. Tis great.

Ah, I can so see Sho acting in this manner. Unfortunately, I can also see it ending just that way too *sob*. I am so sad because I want them to be friends... no maid... no prince... no kissy face... friends

You can never have too many true friends

Damn straight, he totally got what he deserved! I'd imagine something like this would be very cathartic, it makes me happy :)

Loved this. Loved the darkness and the subtle threat that Ren was towards Kyoko. I actually read this on your LJ first and then I started to the others here.

So thanks! Now I can favorite.

LMAO. All the name changes. Hilarious! Sho is high as a kite.

I love love this story. Showing how tempting and completely fallen not in love, maybe in lust? but fallen nevertheless, Shoko is.

There is this whole analytical thing I so want to go into right now. This story spoke about so much about Sho and Shoko individually but there is no way I could go into it.

Brilliantly done.

oh my gosh I love these set of one-shots _ please keep it up :)

Aww.. what a sweet chapter.. isn't that what we wants to see of Kyoko and ren? thanks for writing