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This was brilliant.

I loved getting into Sherlock's mind; and the thought of dominoes falling inside his brain was just fascinating to me! I also liked the description of his coat, the grooves on his skin, how everything feels to him. It was so captivating.

I liked that everything came together in Sherlock's mind and how it just flowed so seamlessly.

Thank you for writing this fabulous oneshot.

Wow. Really good. I knew the scene you were describing. I've always wondered about that scene too-where he actually gets hit by the car and he just keeps on going. I've been trying to figure out why that was in the story. Was it one of Moriarty's men? Sorry just musing out loud. I like the description though. Thank you.

Okay, I absolutely love the way you can get into Sherlock's mind. Another fantastic insight.

- K

This is beautiful poetry-prose. The brevity, the language, Sherlock's thoughts weaved in seamlessly. I'm in love.

Congratulations.

(Though "who's" should be "whose"...)