Cute story. Thank you for finishing the story.

Good story

really good story

Absolutely NOTHING is happening

it's good, the writing is a little childish, but the story actually is very good.

Aw this was a sweet story!

Your story just keeps getting better and better!

I'm not one to leave comments but i really like this book so far. And i am only on chapter three. You have done a great job! I cant wait to read this rest of the story!

Loved it .

Wolf doing the conga? LMAO

I love your story! I was hoping you might add a chapter from Edward's pov. I'm not criticizing your story just would like to read the part where it hits the fan & Eddie realizes Bella loves Jake. Jake and Bella are too cute! I'm glad Jake found her in the woods that night and imprinted. Hope things are going better for you! Enjoying reading your story!

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She says she wont let that albino control her emotions and jacob help her fill better i think you rushed a bit he just fixed her car and their conversation waa few words hmmm

Awesome story! Jake and Bella are adorable! I'm glad Bella pulled out of her zombie phase and gave Jake a chance. Loved the imprint idea scene. Jake is so thoughtful and kind! I enjoyed reading this story and hope you might add a chapter to it someday. Thank you for sharing this lovely story with us!

I am so giddy about their progression that I actually squealed in delight. Which is something I so don't do at all. Even my brother notices how different I am when I'm reading JakeXBea stories. LOL