Paul's last name is Lahote, so I don't understand this McGrath last name you invented.

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Why didn't she ask Sam what he meant by Imprint? Why would she forgive them without an explanation for their actions? She's been carrying around that hurt for 6 yearsshe just gave in?

Ok so she's saying she needs to forgive them rigjt? but she's not exactly miss honesty is she? She's keeping shit from them to and I'm sorry but her bond with her brother should be stronger then her bond with Seth

I'm sorry but forgive them for what? they did nothing wrong to her at all she over reacted

she's being a bitch I wasn't going to say anything but she is being a bitch stop acting like a damn child and grow up you can't keep running from people face your damn problems. also the police wouldn't of let her leave without taking her statement first. I do like your story but Bella really is being a bitch to all of them

Please write more.

She’s a little emotionally constipated but overall o enjoyed the story. I have a weak spot for hurt/romance type stories.

urg bella is kinda weak. At chapter 13. i would read more but she gives in to much and to easy. 6 yrs of schooling to be a photographer teacher? -.- seriously? thats nursing or doctoring school time and u chose that amount of time to be a teacher? Always hated when authors have the female be a teacher or nurse like its the fucking start of woman rights and thats the only jobs available for them? Its not imaginative and kinda degrading.

Good story.

Totally lost interest in this many disjointed sub plots that do nothing for the story keep popping up.

How does this fit in the story?

Why all of a sudden she can't stay away from him when she spent six year away without a like the Twilight books so many plot inconsistent.

Don't they think it would be a good idea to have one or all of the imprint come over and talk to her explain things to he,but no i doubt that will happen.

Since she took the shifting thing well i wonder how she will take finding out that the spirits have decided that she belongs to Sam? also it is off not of,another one.