Reviews for Who Says You Can't Have It All
Guest chapter 13 . 6/21
Who cares! Charlie has no right to be upset about anything.
Elisabeth123 chapter 1 . 6/3
Please finish this story please!
jk chapter 16 . 6/21/2015
why give her all the bad symptoms? kids always seem to write pregnant woman as fucking crazy people...some women don't get irrational, some don't get nasty cravings, some women get in the car and get their own fucking taco bell
jk chapter 6 . 5/28/2015
funny I don't think this is what he wants to give her but what she can give him...cause she can have a baby with anybody...and he finds out he can have a baby and he runs back to bella...and it just so happens he can have her blood to...seems rather convienant to me...
jk chapter 4 . 5/28/2015
bellas to easy in this story...and I mean a hoe...I mean EASY
Edward ditches her and when she sees him again its all rainbows and kittens? wtf?
oh I love you you came back to me...your here now
im gonna puke
Edward it seems can do whatever he wants and its ok...I bet she'd be ok if he cheated on her too
BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I'm happy this was reposted at some point and that I happened upon it.
What a sweet premise. And I love that E/B have a little son. What's his name I wonder? He's a cutie I can tell
already. And I love Nana making cookies for him.
BridieM chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Loved this. Loved the humour. :)
babesbraves chapter 18 . 9/24/2013
Like you I don't read fan fiction I immerse myself in it, I go through the whole plethora of emotions my husband of 27 years calls me a softie and hands me tissues when I cry! Saying all this I would love for you to finish this fantastic book your writing is so creative it's like I am living in the middle and witnessing everything around me. If you pass it on to another writer they will not be able to create the same feelings and emotions and depth to the story and it would be a great shame for that to happen. So please pity us mere uncreative mortals and update and finish your book!
sammieanne chapter 18 . 1/15/2013
Thank you for such a lovely cliff hanger, I truly hope you plan to complete this story. If only note one and two didn't exist there could have been a end to this wonerful story.
sammieanne chapter 12 . 1/15/2013
Charlie best remember Bella is married. She best remember she is a grown up and having a baby a very special baby and behave accordingly. She must be a old timey young woman,cause women now aday don't take shit like Charlie is trying.
beccaavivianrose chapter 18 . 1/4/2013
what happenedddd? :)
Krystyne chapter 16 . 12/28/2012
I know this feedback is nearly a year late, and that you have quit writing this story, and your active cyber life, but I wanted to comment. I love how you are writing an alternative to the awful pregnancy we saw in Breaking Dawn. I like the idea of them sharing in the important moments just like normal people. Hope all is well with you and your family!
Karen Day chapter 18 . 12/17/2012
I would really love to see this story finished
RedViolet101 chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Yay! I found this story!
LizzyAtTheLake chapter 18 . 8/26/2012
Good luck to you. Of course, I'm sad to see the story dropped...BUT, I am certain you have made the right decision. Your family should certainly come before our fan fiction world must enjoy reading now when you can. Someday, things will change and you will have time to participate again. I thjk its a good idea to allow someome else to continue.

Again, good luck to you. And peace to your family
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