Reviews for Four Smiles He Missed And One He Didn't |
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![]() ![]() nice :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Quite nice. I loved the 'don't open your eyes' part where Arthur immediately lunges forward knowing how Eames will react. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh geez. This fic is so amazingly awesome and snarky and dry that I just...I want to roll around in it for hours. Bask. Arthur is my favorite character, with Eames as close second, and this fic makes me love them plus a thousand, which I really hadn't thought possible. You're just - all the awesome. ALL OF IT. Thank you so much for this; I haven't laughed so much in a long time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love those 41 prompts, and I think you did this one excellently! I was really laughing at the eye accident, too, Yusuf's experiments gone haywire is always a good thing to read! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, you wrote everyone perfectly. I especially like your Eames voice. :) Arthur is adorable in the train scene. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the train scene so much that I had to read it twice :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *hee* I really like the one on the train. I think that might be one of my favorite scenes from a fic so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely beautiful, you've got all the voices down perfectly! *sigh* This totally made my day ;) ~Nevair |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this a lot ! D I like the idea of those five smiles, I like the different parts and the evolution between Eames and Arthur, and I like the way you wrote it - it's light and fun but it's also touching. I had a great time reading your story, thanks :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() all of these are wonderful, the train scene was fantastic - i can just see arthur diving over ariadne and i assume cobb to stop eames from opening his eyes. and the last bit was great too, somewhat of an ambiguous ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I completely love the scene on the train :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. _ I loved reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Very nice job dude. Love it. Keep em comin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the third part the most. :P |