I have read this fic so many times. I love it! Would love to read a future take about Will and his siblings. And of course Bella and Edward.
Thanks Tracy

Not sure how I never read this story till now, all these years later, but so very glad I did. Many thanks to both you and your team for writing this story. I so very much enjoyed reading it!

I completely disagree with what you made William say to his father. Edward has every right to be angry and to resent Bella. She may have suffer too but there is a major difference between her and Edward, in the end she had a choice, Edward didn't. It was her decision to leave him, it was her decision to never contact him about the fact that he had a son. As a matter of fact how can Edward ever trust Bella again ? Clearly she see no problem with taking this kind of decision without consulting or informing him, how can he be sure she isn't going to do it again ?

I don't know if you'll read this, but I sobbed reading this chapter; Carlisle is such a well written character, and following his arc has made me realise a couple of hard truths in my own life. I love how you be incorporated a blend of my favourite fanfic tropes while also including hard hitting bits of realism and drama, written so beautifully that a stoic reader, who goes through hundreds of fanfics a month, was reduced to a wailing mess. I honestly felt Carlisle's pain and regret, not to mention how torn Edward must have felt in his last moments. It was absolutely stunning, so thanks and well done. Xxx

I’ve been reading this story for the past few days and have enjoyed it immensely! I love where you took the characters and what they had to overcome to get there. What a nasty Carlisle! Though he kind of redeemed himself at the end and I kind of felt sorry for him, it was too little to late for his son. You gave us great characters especially Will. Gosh I love that kid! Thank you for sharing your talent and time with us. I’ll be sure to check out your other stories.

Awesome

I fell in love with this story its is it wow...

Why does Amelia talk like she’s 6...isn’t she 14? Will didn’t baby speak...

So sad about this kind of Carlisle...I know it would prolly be a bit cliche if Esmeralda was with Charles then left him for Carlisle, but I wish...

There had better be a DAMN GOOD REASON for keeping his son away from him for 13 years. Money better not be the only excuse.

Im not crying. It's allergie season.

This story is wonderful!

Excelente historia y eso que no pude leerla en mi idioma, hablo español y gracias a Díos, mi celular tradujo la historia, no lo hace igual que una persona que traduce pero aún tuve la suerte de leerla. Te felicito, me encantó la trama, excelente. Dios te bendiga.

This was a nice story, thank you for sharing! The last two chapters felt a little rushed though, and there were a few inconsistencies throughout the story. For example, John, Jack, John, Jack? The same character had two names! Same with Jenks' kids they had two names as well. There were a lot of small grammatical errors throughout the entire work but considering you're from Greece I'm assuming English isnt your first language so it wasnt bad at all, most of the work read smoothly! I cried like a baby during that last scene with Carlisle, you have such a way with words. Overall, good story. I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

Oh wow what a rollercoaster that was! The story was so captivating that I couldn't take my eyes off of it for a min. Good job. Sad that it had to end.

Great story