azula was not born a monster

You referred Ozai here as Fire Lord when he's actually Prince during this time.

An unfortunate head cannon of mine
:"Ozai started sexually abusing Azula ever since Ursa was banished."
(Oral Sex.)

This has to be one the best Azula!chilhood stories I have read. You sdid an excellent job in showing us how Azula beace who she is in canon, showing us what is going on in her mind at such a young age. I never thought that her decent into madness would begin at such a young age. Now I will have to read the next one~GrayonPaladin

Ok normally I will wait till the end of a completed story to review but I feel that I need to say somthing. Damn the way you showing Azula's childhood is perfect. Now the way she acts in canon makes sense, it's a defense mechinizum to keep others from hurting her. ~GraysonPaladin

This was amazing. I literally read it three times before I reviewed. I feel like this is exactly how Mike and Brian wanted Azula to be portrayed. There are no words for this. Wonderfully done.

This is great. I look forward to Loud. Please keep up the good work. This is a well crafted story that is very unique in the way it handles her character.

ohh haha I really like your idea! I loved this story and I'm excited for Loud! Oh and I liked the part about how it's because of Ursa she forced the demons away :)

I really like it when people use the gray areas in a character's life to express their own speculations. Especially when it's believable. I like the childlike qualities expressed in these two major antagonists. Even without a substantial knowledge of Avatar: the Last Airbender, I can very clearly understand the story.

You're writing is overall very descriptive, and your dialogue is very good at holding attention. I didn't see any grammatical areas. Very good. There are a few rough patches, places where it doesn't flow as well, but overal the story has a good rhythm and flow. But who desn't have that?

Good job, keep up the great work.

It's beautifully crafted. I have nothing more to say.

Oh my goodness that was a brilliant ending and I can't wait for "Loud" to be started. This whole story was great and really makes me feel for the siblings.

this is amazing! is there any way you could message me when the first chapter of Loud is up?

This chapter made my day! i cant wait for loud to come out! you mentioned a sort of love that pon and shui had held for azula, is it like her father's love or an actual love for a child? (though i cant really imagine that kind of love, unless it is sick and twisted) And the fact that your making it a trilogy sounds awesome!

I love the idea you're such a good writer. Also I love the ending if this part it was really good :)

Let's have a quick recap of all my past reviews:

Dang Fyre, you're an emotional ducky!

Do you have my DNA in your BRAIN?

o_O You are amazing at reading minds.

People, are YOU insane?

"Oh yeah, she was laying in a pool of her own blood for who knows how long, but some dude told me she'd be okay, so now I'm gonna go talk to her brother about him and not even care about her."

Fyre scared now.

I like Pie.

Her nightmare scared me. XD

Think I'm gonna sign off and go take an IBProfin, or something. Ah.

Look at what you did to me! You're killing me with this! Every word, every emotion, tore at my heart and made my mind spin and made me write crazy stuff! I loved this story, it was purely Amazing, and I'm scared to say anything else. Nothing else could describe it. This was Amazing. Can't wait until Loud and Eternal. Love you forever.

~Fyre