good story :) more maven(mayxsteven) please x)

Absolutely lovely. I can't help but reread this over and over, amazed at your story. Thank you so much for writing!

I think this was sweet. Simple but very well done and written insanely well. nice job! :3

Awesome. All I can say.

- Cherry

I really liked this fic! I think you did a great job with this. Would love to read more Steven/May from you!

This is very, very pretty. Subtle and kind of placid, but sometimes that's what really works. I love your take on May. :)

AWW this is cute :) love love LOVE this!

Haha! "Don't pull a Steven..." this was such a great read, you write amazingly!

Now THIS is a great story. It's a perfect oneshot––it's got that feeling of mystery with a touch of reality that a reader can sink into, and a neat ending that conveys satisfaction, but still lets life move on for them. I loved it, especially the line where Steven wonders if this was what him showing up and leaving was like for May :)

The only error I noticed was Dewport––I think it's Dewford.

Good stuff!

awww that was really bittersweet in a good way. I like the way you did the characters

I'm glad Steven came back to Hoenn. they're so meant for each other *sigh*

it's nice to see another HoennChapionShipping story!

great work :D

Thanks for writing this, I enjoyed it very much. This is a favorite pairing of mine and there isn't much of it around, so I was really pleased to see this. Text flow was lovely. :)

Keep it up.

Very lovely, I enjoyed reading it very much. :) Thank you for writing this.