noooooooooooooooo

ooooooooh!

do a chapter where darkwing first encounters saphire

nice.

boy maybe you should give liquidator a girlfriend and maybe bushroot should date rhoda

maybe darkwing should get a new girlfriend

i feel sorry for darkwing

do a chapter where megavolt asks saphire to join the fearsome five so she won't break up with him and make them become the fearsome six

I'm so happy for Megavolt.

This story is cool! Ever thought of revisiting it? I'm not one to talk, but an update would be fun! I love Darkwing and friends.

That is definitely Opposites Attack! I still wish Darkwing Duck had a season 4, though.

Very nice chapter. By the way, I have noticed some spelling errors. it's spelled Gosalyn, not Gossalyn. Also, it is spelled facade, not fascade. It is not gaint, it's "giant", Okay?

You also spelled shield wrong. It's shield, not "sheild". Not to be rude or anything. I was trying to be helpful is all.

Hi Pheonix Ride.

Shriek! I love this!

Just an idea:

I think you could really expand on this idea between his turning into a robotically enhanced duck and before turning back.

I feel that being thrifty is a thing that Darkwing does best. DW could probably find a few chances to use his robotic abilities constructively while he's got them. I'm convinced the duck of ingenuity and daring would give anyone a run for their money whether metal or flesh.

Brilliant stuff. Can't wait for the next one.

Your Friend in Writing

VAPX007

Hi Phoenix Ride

That's much better, I'm really glad.

Keep writing, I wanna find out what happens next!

Your Friend in Writing

VAPX007

Hi Pheonis Ride

Thank you for posting. This chapter is a very nice, simple little story that wins my heart's vote.

Just some friendly advice:

I beg you, please remember to spell check. This is solid gold advice to all and sundry fan fic writers, because most people aren't walking dictionaries. (I only know a few, and these guys aren't even writers!) If you're hard pressed, there's an [abc tick] icon in the document upload section when you open up the story to format prior to posting.

Some more advice:

I always find it useful just to do a final read over as I'm posting because there are always things that even the almighty and powerful Miscrosoft Word Spelling & Grammer checker tool misses.

I know I'm a total nutter for editing my own stories but I think anyone should have at the very least three 'final' check points:

1. "I'm happy with this."

2. Spell and grammer check it.

Action: [Upload it]

3. While formatting, do a quick read of it as you go along which is the official 'final check'.

The 'final check' comes last, just in case something weird just happened thanks to the grammer checker.

One word that the spell checker won't catch is 'drag' versus 'drug'. Darkwing either 'dragged' Ghoul out of the wreckage, or 'dug' him out of the wreckage. Either way is good imagery. Or if you really-really want both words you could say "He 'dug' him out of the wreckage and then 'dragged' him away." (Heh, sorry, getting a bit excited here!)

Once again I thank you for posting. I whole-heartedly think it's precious, I sincerely do. My head just thinks it needs a little polishing.

I hope I haven't upset you. I only mean to give you practical and friendly advice; the kind that I would like to get for myself.

Please keep writing.

VAPX007