| Reviews for Kiitsu |
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Withered White Rose chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 nice kitten reference |
b-mystique chapter 1 . 8/4/2010 Really cute!:-) |
Bryn Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/4/2010 Annie is exactly like a kitten. Awesome. |
MaraudingSnitch1314 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010 Awww, the kitten analogy is very cute and quite applicable. Thought it was funny that Annie looked up Auggie's prom date. ) |
ferret assassin nin chapter 1 . 8/3/2010 lol. nice one. i seriously lik this fic and now my lik of Auggie has increased more than record likes. not love, yet, he's Annie's take after all ;) but definitely hot nonetheless. lol overall, great fic and description. lol ferret nin |
Bartimus Crotchety chapter 1 . 8/3/2010 Now this was cute! a nice epilogue! thanks. Bart |
Lady Light chapter 1 . 8/3/2010 D Short and sweet! It was amusing heehee. |
oceanmoon chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 A lot of the time, when I read a story that does not have my favorite couple as a couple, it can make me feel sick. Literally sick... BUT this story did no such thing to me. You are probably the first author to do that for me. Aside from a few little spelling flubs, this was very good, and if you even got a good review from someone who has not even seen Covert Affairs, then you know you did well. I loved your little descriptions, and your character banter was very realistic and it made me laugh. Great Job! ~~%~~( |
crystal-rose19 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 I like this story, and I think you did extremely well with the characters. Their banter was spot on. My only criticism (and it's a small one, no worries) is that I'm pretty sure the word is spelled Kiisu, and it's Estonian, not Histonian. Other than that I thought this was a wonderful one shot that did well to capture their friendship. |
ComicalEpiphanies chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 I thought the analogy was spot on and not a little funny. Good job. I liked it. |
Yoshimi25 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 Actually, I liked this one. To be honest, I have never seen Covert Affairs and I have no clue who these people are, but the writing was very easy to read and I finished the whole thing. The only thing I might suggest would be describing the characters in a bit more detail...hair color, age, height - that kind of thing...because as someone who has never seen the show, I have no idea what they look like. However, I was able to pick up on the overall tone and kinda forgot that I didn't know what they looked like - a sign of a good author - when you can draw the reader into your world. |