I shed a tear for this story. Quite beautiful...despite the logic of the story being as confusing as ever.

Love it

Oh my gosh YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! I absolutely LOVE this story and- I love all yr stories.

Well done

Lovely!

you have a temdency to jasten lpve plots, but you are such a marvelous writer regardless.

Gorgeous! Love the side pairings. Tom and Harry's relationship is sweet and steamy. Marvellous!

Amazing work.

I have never been a fan of HermioneXSeverus, but I kinda like this one here

This is amazing. The last chapter was so bitter sweet. More sweet than bitter.
Honestly the whole story felt otherworldly like something from a dream So far but so near.
Something almost tangible.
Love that can be very strong at moments but It may not last...
Thank you fro writing this amazing piece.

Interesting other pairings that were not expected, the story was cute.

Snape, Riddle, Slughorn, Remus Lupin, and now Sirius Black? Is everyone a pedophile, attracted to children over 20 years younger than them?

And 4 out of 5 acted on their attraction. Adults between the ages of 40 and 70 getting physically intimate with 15 to 17-year-old students.

Well that's upsetting

I really enjoyed chapter 1 of this story. As well as all of Dumbledore’s journal entries. Those parts were beautifully written. Unfortunately, the rest of the story didn’t follow in the same manner. Not that it was terrible, and I’m not saying that I hated it, but it seems like chapter 1 didn’t belong with this story. It could have stood alone, in my estimation.

Anyway, thanks.

You have such a distinctive style. Lyrical? Lilting? Melodic? Something like that I think. Somehow reading you stories makes me feel soothed as if I had been listening to lovely music. I wish I too were good with words so that I could describe it to you so that you would know how good it is for me. Your stories make me cry with a smile on my face. Such a strange reaction. I wonder how you feel when you write.

entirely OOC…but still interesting