Yep, love the progression of hungary's sexuality. I really liked how you worked in Prussia's and Hungary's relationship, all of that unexplored potential is palpable. Good work.

Really awesome imagining of Hungary's progression. my favourite line has to be "the first time hungary knows of austria, it's the worst day of his life and the best day of hers."

And then her realisation that she's still the same inside is just perfect. I love how you even included her belief that she'd grow a manhood and didn't make it a joke.

This is somehow so sad. Beautifully written, your non-capitolized words really added to the effect.

This was a very cute story~

I like the writing style and the word choice.

It's just a little hard to understand sometimes because of some punctuation errors.

Amazing piece of work. Your use-or non-use-of capitalization draws the eye away from the format of the piece to what is actually presented, purposefully done or not. Very e. e. cummings-esque, very well done.

I like it.

Was that an intercourse scene? It was very formally written. Not really hard core or anything, which is good mnd you.

This story is nice. Though I must admit that the proper use of capitalization and punctuations would have created more impact on me. I don't know if it is your wrting style so I hope you would not be offended. But plot-wise and the flow was really well written. Kudos for that! And more from you is what I hope for. :D

Wow this is so beautiful and so haunting as well. I loved how you explored Hungary's dichtonomy and her relationship with Prussia and Austria. The price she paid for the security fo her people and the brief moment when her dreams became a reality.

wonderful job! m(_ _)m

As short as it is, it still well writing and a refreshing story.

I don't think it needs to be rated M though.

Amazing. Just, really great. The lack of capital letters was rather impacting, for some reason.

This was so good. Loved it!

I love it! The confusion between Hungary and her gender is really beautifully rendered. I can totally feel her confusion when everything changes in her world.

And, of course, Prussia is perfect in every sense, from his attitude, to his words to how he treats Hungary despite the fact that she's changed. Like a little kid who either doesn't notice or doesn't care.

Awesome.

I- there was supposed to be no capitalization, right?

*bricked for askig such a stupid question*

It was beautifully written, though D:

Your style is very free~ It's fun to read~

Ah, Hungary, sorry :( Must suck to have people turning her into a total girl. (Btw, love the line about her "favorite horse"...that seems to be the right term considering the subject.)

"...Map out her body." "...Knowing his geography as well as he does." Love those those references to geography -nods-

All in all - really damn good~

~PT

Oh wow, what can I say? I love this. I adore how you switch back and forth between female and male pronouns for Hungary, further showing her gender confusion. I think you really captured the character's personalities. I'm a little sad this is so short - I'd love to read more. You wrapped it up well though, saying that they were still the same inside. Made me smile - it was a bittersweet.

This is fantastic :)

~ Celia