| Reviews for A Fukutaichou's Duty |
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   Angel Fantasy chapter 2 . 6/30/2018 And I agree with you-it's the best written (short) story I've read of Toshiro and Rangiku together. The angst made it twinge, gave the story plot and character depth, and I loved that you wrote both POVs instead of just one, allowing us to see into both shinigami's minds. And of course the smut... it was interesting in its creativity, because it went backward - bottom up instead of going southward. You also have a way with words that makes the action even better to read, packing big intensity with three times as less description and details as some other stories. Plus, the ending... I laughed hard over the last few lines, because imagining Toshiro reading romance novels to seduce his vice-captain is just-his face must have been priceless if those books were mature-rated xDD Nonetheless his knowledge paid off in the end and that's what counts. All in all, excellent story, wish you'd make more of these two together because you're very good at writing them as a couple. Thank you for making this two-shot drabble! |
| bleachfanficfanatic chapter 2 . 1/24/2017 This was amazing! You invoke all the emotions and even though it was a little odd to think of them together while he's still so young looking you made it work. And the last few lines were priceless! |
| WinglessRaven chapter 2 . 3/1/2016 Frickin' awesome! Love the story and it's ending! xxx |
| Savage chapter 2 . 8/20/2015 This was fucking perfect! I loved it! |
| Cersesi chapter 2 . 4/13/2014 I like it. |
| Zaphire the Above chapter 2 . 3/26/2014 my my |
| DaOneInDaCorner520 chapter 2 . 8/13/2013 Lol, that explains why he's ALWAYS working on more paperwork. |
| ebrahimvans chapter 2 . 8/5/2013 That was. . . . . . .AMAZING(and i dont say uhat i alot) ;) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/30/2013 really awesome man. |
| Moderately Mad Moxxi chapter 2 . 2/8/2013 Very nice. I like the take on the 10th's past captains, and Rangiku's insecurity because of it. Throwing in Nanao and Shunsui was a nice touch, too. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/11/2012 This is the best Fanfic ever! MORE! |
| oakleaf chapter 2 . 11/10/2012 Heart-breakingly beautiful. The first chapter was well structured, and I like how the quick scenes allow the reader to gain all the information without being bogged down by ling explanations. You characterise well and I enjoy how you present that relationship between the two of them. The ending was hilarious, both the books and the confrontation with Nanao. Amazing story, well done! |
| BlueberriesGoneBad chapter 1 . 11/6/2012 This is such a sweeeeet story. So cute! I like the character development you've put in. You need to write more things like this. :) |
| djohnson2 chapter 2 . 10/29/2012 Perfection! |
| AzTec999 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012 this is ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL STORIES that i have just read in this site. you're a great writer so keep it up... :)(: |
