Lasted this much. Tbh i find it weird to keep on introducing her kekkei genkai to every opponent whenever they ask. Isn’t weird? I mean u divulge even the secrets of ur bloodline limit. I dont think ninjas would do that bec every clan would die and kill just to protect their secrets. But she just randomly blurts it out even to an opponent whenever she uses them. Hahaha really funny.

that amazing story

Love it so much !

You need to work on your writing skills and make it more realistic. Your not using the characters to their full extent. And when they're speaking be more realistic.

Omg I cried! you can do a sequel ya know! But PLEASE make a sequel!

Um its ok/good but not good enough...

I like the premise, though I feel as though the relationship went on a bit fast... I mean, they only met a day ago, and they've already hugged and confirmed their feelings for each other? Man, that's way too fast. But other than that, I liked it.

aw that is sooo cute.

I think it cute

Sweet

Cool

it was funny that minato scream i laugh really HARD

Every of your story _ is so addicting !
I think I'm addicted reading ur story :0 good job

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Lolz, payback! And Kushina... ohh very interesting! Now I want to keep reading but I'm too tired, darn it! :)