Dear Author, I've just read some of the other reviews... And I feel absolutely disgusted that people can be so rude. Like, humans, if you have a problem with the story or you don't like it, DON'T READ THE STORY AND REVIEW NON-CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM! Like, what the heck! I loved the story, although I may have wished for the ending to be different or the story to continue, I appreciate the effort that went into this story. Thank you for just straight up existing.

Nooooo! Please continueeeeeee!

This is an amazing story, I just cant tell if that is the ending or if RL had just got in the way. Hope life hasnt been too hard and that eventually this story can be finished :)

ONG THIS STORY AND PLOT WAS SOOO GOOD! But please I know it’s been awhile but this doesn’t feel like a proper ending so please can you write another chapter or two to finish it off. Anyways thank you for writing it.

Please finish

WOW, what a horrible ending.

"back in forks were some loose floorboards in my bedroom where I hide things from time to time"

That's a weird fucking sentence.

How about "In my bedroom in Forks I had some loose floorboards where I hid things sometimes" Doesn't that sound better?

I find it funny that THIS is what gives Bella ptsd…...not any of the other shit. And isn't it funny how THIS throws Bella into Jaspers arms. Jasper is not only a piece of shit but a fucking weirdo. He makes people call him MASTER for fucks sake. He makes them wear collars! His friend is a human trafficker. He buys PEOPLE from him.

Ahhh the monster protects her from the other monster and now shes all bout him. Didn't see that coming …..rolls eyes. How fucking predictable.

I don't understand what the fuck that was about

What was that shit about him possibly knowing Alice back in the day? Is that supposed to mean that Alice is like his soulmate? Too bad he didn't take Alice instead of Bella!

Bella says that Charlie helped her pay for her apartment while she was in college, then in the next breath says "though I shouldn't have to worry about bills when I should be focusing on my education". Way to make her sound like a pampered, expectant, piece of shit. Normal people pay their bills alone...they don't EXPECT to have their parents pay them. Bella is a dumb bitch.

So did you steal this story or did the other person? Theres a story exactly like this on here but with Edward in Jaspers place.

Giving her someone to fear so that she can relie on Jasper for protection is too clique.

Im surprised that Bella isn't more fucking disgusted that Jasper saw something like that and did nothing. If she hated him before that hate should be uncontrollable now.