This was wonderfully intense which is really hard to find in a good story these days. This was, kind of hard to explain I wish I could shove you in my head, real in a realistic in a way that was. . . Damn hard to explain. This was really good though. Totally deserves to be fave'd a lot.

The only critique I have is a couple of places where the verb doesn't exactly match the sentence structure. You have "pull" instead of "pulling", for example, but I only spotted that issue two or three times and everything else was simply splendid. Yes, I'm using old fashioned adjectives because I can't think of any other way to describe this fanfic than splendidly fantastic.

This one's really interesting. Their feelings about their relationship is somewhat really canon, if older, it has the same strange, colourful, two-against-the-world tint. But the fic itself... kind of like Shinobi of the modern AU - same normalcy and understanding about killing the enemy, and, well, I do think they both are rather in character, especially Sasuke. I liked it, thanks for writing))

OMG, that was crazy!

Loved it, though.

On seconds thoughts, are you going to update "One Love"? Could you do one chapter about asphyxiophilia/hypoxyphilia? I know that is a classic, but, hell, you are the best writer on this kinds of themes (taboos, kinkys, and others serious and dark plots).

Wow, angsty.

And also good. I enjoyed it. :)

I really like it. Poetically obscene and with some wonderful, intense imagery.

Really well written.

wow I really loved this story. Really one of the better ones I've read lately.. good job :)

Wow. That was intense.