Love the story so far!

Just a thought lol Jasper and Bella is my alternative ship like, I like the idea of them. And when I was starting this story, I can't help think how compatible they could be. AaaaAah anyway I do ship ExB still hehe.

Btw I love your descriptions of tastes of emotion ;)))))

I made a Flavor/Emotion index while reading to help me keep them straight. I thought I'd add it as a review in hopes of saving other readers the trouble (though I think it would be more helpful if you perhaps could add it as an author's note in the story itself). ;)

Acid - hate
Apple - humor
Ashes - fury
Blueberry - embarrassment
Caramel - hope
Chocolate, Dark - sadness
Cherry, Maraschino - shock
Chili Powder - dark desire
Cinnamon - desire
Club Soda - insecurity
Copper - fear
Creme Brulee - love
Garlic - impatience
Honey - curiosity
Lemon - confusion
Licorice, Black - angst (hurt)
Marshmallow - excitement
Mint - familiarity
Onion - frustration
Pepper - irritation
Pineapple - amusement
Plastic, Burnt - desperation
Rice - boredom
Salt - nervousness
Strawberry - happiness
Sugar - attraction
Vanilla - peacefulness
Vinegar - ? (something negative)

This was fantastic! Such a great concept

I really like the idea and Bella herself. I absolutely loathe the OC. Ashanti... dear god just awful. The story would've benefited greatly had you just made Bella was she was from birth or have someone random change her and then never be mentioned again. Honestly any other reason would've been preferable. Next is the drawn out garbage between both Bella and Edward. Literally half of the drama could've/should've been cut in half by Bella just explaining what she is. Just a pain in the ass to read.

Even though some parts of it were very bad, I like this fanfiction quite a lot. I was looking for the sequel, then I saw that it was never written. Shame.

I love this story arc! I love this strong Bella! and relationship between succubus and vampire is very cool! I like how they can be each other's meals forever without any major risk. please write a sequel! I would love that! though there are some grammar issues spread throughout, most of it I could figure it out. only a couple times was I really confused. But other than that, your writing is fantastic! would love to read more of this! please, please continue!

Great story! Thanks for sharing!

i LOVE that edward is thrown for a loop. especially with the stretcher lol

I really don't get why Bella isn't just telling Edward what she is...your not having her tell him cause you think it helps the story? Its fucking stupid, its makes all the shit their going through fuckin pointless. Why revert back to the twilight book when you have Bella as a magical creature? I REALLY don't get why you had Bella pretend to be asleep when Edward came...didn't make much sense!
And you really need to watch your grammar...it was particularly bad in this chapter.

This is what I got from the first bunch of paragraphs.
Bella has a alter ego that she calls "her"...lol like. There's two people that inhabit her body...Bella and a monster...how fucking stupid
Bella can taste emotions, and she licked a guy to death?
Lol...I don't get it

It's like exactly reading Twilight with the same scenes and dialogue just with a non human Bella.

I really enjoyed reading this... BUT I was slightly disappointed to see so many lines and scenes taken right out of the book. YET it was intriguing to see them handled differently. I only have two complaints. 1 is the lack of more! You left me wanting. And 2 is some of the spelling mistakes that made some sentences make no sense

Ever read Shields of Power by thunderful? Your story has familiar scenes and quotes that are present in a much older and better story. Especially the James and Alice thing, but there are more. I was enjoying this story until it felt like I had read it before.

nice

Thanks so much for writing, I really enjoyed it!