This story was great omg

The fuck? And that was only the first chapter?

You are an amazing writer! This fic had me on the edge of my seat! I was like what when I found out all three of the langans had a crush on her.

amazing story you should do a sequel to this!

Thank you for a very enjoyable read!

Incredible story ! I loved it . I dont know if it has a sequel , Ibam going to check it out now but if it doesnt you should do one . I have a question . When Serena came into Olivias room and saw Alex she said she seemed familiar . What did she mean by that ?

Ofcourse it is Trevor . Maybe he is not that bad after all .Or maybe he is going to pull over and forve himself on her , I dont know .

You know what really makes me ungry ? Not so much Trevor for he is just a silly boy , immature and spoiled and one would expect nothing more from him . But his dad is unforgivable . And not only because he is drooling over a minor who could be his child but because Olivia is a poor girl who is working to make her living and he doesnt respect that . Why doesnt he target one of the rich girls who will probably like him and ask for it .

I really hope it is the divorce lawyer she is calling .

As tragic as Alexs situation is I cant help but notice that both partucipands where phantasizing of Olivia . This girl . . . always in public service lol . And even funnier was Davin and his certainty that once he gets Olivia beneath him she will be writhing in pleasure ! LOL even more !

The way I see it both Langan men are perverts and they only mean trouble .

I am sooo happy their brake up is over . The poem was fantastic , I didnt know it but I dont read poetry at all . And Olivias comments about it were great too .

Oh man that is what I never understand ! Why dont people explain themselves ? Why didnt Alex tell what Trevor said and what she saw ? Seeing Olivia like this , is heartbreaking .

I am surprised with Alex . I mean I know that a person in love is vulnrerable so she was easily manipulated and hurt but doesnt she know what a douchebag her stepson is ? She shouldnt have believed him in the first place and even after he saw him kissing Olivia she should have talk to her and not jump into conclutions .

The scene in the classroom was very hot ! I find Olivia very bold for being as inexperienced as she is and why did Trevor had to be there and see them on their first time ? That was tottaly bad luck !