omg thsi is greeat ! i hope tha you wtite some more soon

Oh you suck. I loved it. It was amazing. Perfect. Too good. So awesome in fact, I dont think anyone could write it better, and Im uninspired to continue writing my own take on a scene just like this. Its definitely my favourite. I dont know if Ally will be able to trump that. Seriously. :):

-Maysun

Thx so much for this chap! Loved it. Pls write more soon

OMG u are awesome ! i love stories like this ! ur an awesome writer ! :)

Awwe! that was so cute! I loved it! I heart zachy poo

Holy cow! I LOVE THIS! Gah. Not only did you actually have me in tears at the beginning (because, come on, what girl wouldn't cry if Zachary Goode was dead?) but this is also extremely well written. You have a great writing flow and you had me hooked from the very beginning!

Great work!

i LOVED this! one of my favorite one-shots as well as GG stories. I love how you did a Zach POV. i just re-read this earlier today and when i saw you updated i nearly jumped for joy haha (:

omg if zach really died in the book i'd cry, a lot!

this was really good

i'm happy about the ending though :)

Thanks so much for this one! Loved it

that was really good[e] :O

Omg soooo cute! IC and great Zammie. Update!

Please consider a chap in zachs pov. Loved it!

Are you sure you aren't the real Ally Carter because I just had to reread my copy of OGSY after reading this story. This is the same writing style as her in the 4th book

that was really good to bad its a one shot. anyway hope to read more of your stories

Good job, chica! You've got Cammie's voice wonderfully here, right down to the Pros and Cons list. Short, sweet, and totally real. Love it.