Holy crap. This story...It's amazing. These scenarios you've come up with, the way you write the characters...ahdhfiduidfbuhfgbfwegi It's amazing; I love it, especially Nathan's.

This is a great fic but arn't you missing someone? I'd love to hear what you'd think Charles childhood was like. My favorite was Nathan's. When are parents going to learn to leave their teens alone?

you spelled bass "base" and pray "prey" (when I say pray i meant like at church), but other than that it was good

Good:) I enjoy this immensely. Just be cautious of your spelling such as preying should be praying. Well done story though.

Wow this is good so far. Please do write more soon. Keep up the great work.