| Reviews for Ratbat's Crush |
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anom chapter 8 . 3/7/2013 ROFLMFAO ONLY THING THAT COULDA MADE IT BETTER WAS MORE LEWD COMMENTS BY THE AUTOBOTS AND MAYBY MEGATRON GLITCHING OVER THE PORN SCENE BEFORE HE COULD STOP THEN CRUSH IT LMFAOBEST FIC EVER now if only u could contin_sry had to laugh more so i could start breathing again continue this in sequels haha its so good its a crackfic that isnt crack(crack in the insanity and smuttyness but not crack in that it makes freakin sense in pretty much every way how stuff happened lols) |
Hebi R chapter 8 . 1/29/2013 I think Ravage deserves more points for delivering Ratbat's comm. frequency to Eject. And I am not sure how many points Prowl should get (or loose) for being the only one to notice that the porn disc featured Eject. |
Crazygrrl XD chapter 8 . 2/26/2012 ROFL LOVED IT! XDXDXD for some reason I want to see a snipit of them talking over comms XD |
lisa.demonic.angel chapter 8 . 1/23/2012 hey im prayng to primus thez a sexquel. . .er sequel 4 ths? |
ShiTiger chapter 1 . 1/10/2012 The last few paragraphs (first chapter) make me laugh every time I read this! |
SnowyScales chapter 8 . 9/16/2011 This is absolutely adorable. I kind of hope there will be a sequel with more Ratbat/Eject lovings. |
Metalchick36 chapter 8 . 8/28/2011 This story was so good! I loved the reactions of Soundwave, Megatron, Blaster, and of course Starscream! Especially when he found out that Laserbeak and Buzzsaw had been interfacing the whole time, and when he found out the twins have footage of everyone interfacing. I'll bet Starscream will want that footage of Skyfire whacking himslf off. |
StarSwoop chapter 8 . 6/12/2011 Apologies for placing only 1 review but i adored the story and the plot. anyway you could keep it going? i loved soundwave's mortification most and skywarp's wackiness! |
KnightDweller chapter 8 . 1/29/2011 the pointrs system made me lol so hard. I love ratbat so much . |
P.A.W.07 chapter 8 . 10/24/2010 Took me forever to get back to this, but I did. Glad you added that Starscream scene though it seemed that his job wasn't as complicated as anyone thought it would be. XD Love the list at the end. That list was just to great. |
RulerofFire chapter 8 . 9/22/2010 Overall I liked the story. Epic reactions from everyone :) What I must point out is the character points chart. Why don't more people have this? That had me rolling with laughter so hard (or maybe I was having a seizure :D) |
9aza chapter 8 . 9/20/2010 Oh yes! The epilogue has arrived! Huh. The day before, I was actually thinking about this fic. I enjoyed this last chapter very much. It was very funny. Though the twins keeping recordings of all the Autobots is disturbing. Lol! The thought of the high command watching while the avian Cassettes got busy makes me giggle. XD The ending was sweet and I'm happy that Eject will stay in touch with Ratbat. I'm sad that it's over now, but I enjoyed every word of it. :D |
P.A.W.07 chapter 7 . 8/25/2010 I laughed myself silly with this fic. I don't know if it Soundwave's reaction, Megatron belevolent attitude, the cassettes casual use of the word porn, or Eject's use of sports-wording. Greatness, I was laughing myself silly for the last two chapters. And just one more chapter left to go. I don't know if I can't wait that long to see what a fantastic mess this is going to be... though I do hope you put some of that Starscream scene in. XD |
Fluffythewatcher chapter 7 . 8/19/2010 This is too cute I can't stop giggling. X3 |
ShiTiger chapter 7 . 8/19/2010 So naive... innocent and clueless :) I wonder if one of them will be carrying. |