Awww poor Arthur :(

Hey there.

Maybe I am just a crybaby, but this was written in such a beautiful style ... makes me cry and I can't help it. Cause you used every single word so damned brilliantly and there is not one word that is too much.

I have just watched the movie two days ago and this just pushed me into the whole world all over again.

Great.

Gut wrenching 0.0 great work. Cheers!

"He suddenly doesn't want to speak, speaking will make it real, speaking will make it hurt. But he does anyways. "He's gone. He's never coming back."

He tried to hold himself together, tries to maintain the perfect, crisp, undetached demeanor he's so used to showing the world, but as soon as the words are out of his mouth, something snaps, and his façade shatters into a million tiny pieces."

I really liked it from there on. It was truly how Arthur would react once he finally realised it...

It almost made me cry with him.

This was a great story!

Keep the good work up!

"Hopefully he doesn't drive straight through the tissue-paper." That's one of the best lines I've encountered in a long time. Loved the whole thing, but that in particular really had an impact. Thanks for posting! :)

I really enjoyed reading this fic. The relationship between Cobb and Arthur was really interesting and I would have loved to hear more, but your ambiguity was perfect for the characters. Love it.

jeeze! i got all teary-eyed! i am of the opinion that the top was going to fall, and i think it is half the fact that it wobbled, and half the fact that i don't think Arthur would have anybody left if it was a dream. i mean...i don't think he had anyone else waiting for him, just traveling around with Cobb and doing jobs. it would be too heartbreaking to think he was so alone... please do a little follow up! please!

beautiful imagery, i love the personification/metaphor of the tissue, its written so well, i can't wait to read the next chapter!

That was very good :) My favorourite line was 'hoping he doesn't drive straight through the tissue paper'. Thanks~

Poor Arthur. I'm glad he wasn't alone when he broke down though. Even if it seems like Ariadne doesn't understand him very well, I guess maybe that's a blessing too. She'd have to meet and learn a whole new Arthur when this is over and he puts the pieces back together. He won't be the same after this.

Thanks fo posting.

-Ellie

OMG! I would love you forever if you continued this! SO GOOD! I think you nailed how Arthur would react perfectly. Loved it! It got me all choked up.

Hmm, This looks really good!

There isn't much promising Inception fanfiction but this seems to be one of the few.

Good job! :)

Very emotional. You crafted Arthur expertly. Fav'ing.