The story isn't really going into the pain the separation a wolf and his imprint feels when apart. It really doesn't seem like they're affected very much... I feel as if the story concept is there but the difficulties of life apart isn't being explored. Renesmee should be resentful of the separation. Both Jake and her should be in pain and life should be exceedingly difficult without each other. The story isn't really keeping with the canon (background) for how imprinting works. Yes Jacob could feel her nightmare but both should be in constant pain due to their imposed separation.

Enjoyed the concept of this story but not a fan that the story didn't commit to Nessie's anger towards her mother. I would have really liked to see her as a rebellious child that showed love to one parent but not the other. I feel that she gave in too quickly and that having her make up with her mother gets rid of the potential drama for the Cullen's family dynamics.

CALLED IT! Have to say, the ginger ale and crackers and throwing up were a bit of a give-away:)

Just leave Leah alone people!

I hope so! Seth and Quinn would be so cute!

It's Aro

But Seth likes vampires...?

Haha I can guess:)

this is amazing please write more

Just like to say you are better than Shakespeare at writing my mind was blown at least 50 times. BEST FANFIC EVER!

This story need a sequel.

esta fatal escrito es una buena uistoria pero tienes que aprender a escribir

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really good thanks

Umm...Jared imprinted on Kim, not Kim and Embry. Also, Bella started dating Edward when she was 17, not 16. The story would be better if you got your facts together.