Is it everybody looking for a cookie comment star sticker affirmative for their writing skills...good grief...

Loved it! Please please write the sequelthis was bloody brilliant!

You say that twice (and it became much more that that he been taught) The writing is interesting and well thought out bloody good job.

I noticed several times you wrote ow. O w is a sound of pain. Oh is the sound of realisation.

ANDERSON! you son of a bitch! heyy I loved ypur stpry very much thank you for writing it 3

This was quite lovely. An absolute joy to read. I love all the plot twists and little comments from John. I especially enjoyed the last three chapters. I loved how Sally wanted to see them happy and that Anderson as the bad guy was so very interesting but it does make sense. I really would love to see a sequel to this. Especially with them being MI5 agents now as a plot twist on top of everything and how Sally's attitude towards them would be changed. And who the new examiner would be and, of course, Moriarty. I think you're a most wonderful author and writer. Cheers and ta. I know my twin is loving your story so far like I did and we both shall be reading it over and over.

The best

Kyaaaaaaa love it

Interesting story and premise. I was a little disappointed that there wasn't more detail about how they were messing with Mycroft. And there was definitely a few chapters in the middle that felt like they were plucked straight from the show. Otherwise, pretty good. Thanks!

Great story !

Wow. This story is so nice! It was such a nice idea to have John and Sherlock pretend to be a couple, then really become one. That idea really doesn't grow old does it?:) But I just wish to clarify one thing: did you meant M16 or is it just me who finds M15 a little weird? I don't really remember M15 fr anywhere... Unless Mycroft has another department? Anyways, nice story!

Awesome story! J think you should write a sequel with Sherlock and John in their new jobs as MI5 agents!

I love the story! You did an amazing job with progressing the plot.

Mycroft is brilliant :)

It took me like...
FOREVER TO READ THIS.
But amazing! :D