Very sexy. Some grammar problems here and there though.

Wow, just wow!

uh is this a 1 shot or is there more plz say theres more next chapter desmond meets shaun

uh is this a 1 shot or is there more plz say theres more next chapter desmond meets shaun

Nuts, this is the second time my innocence has been destroyed by a lucy and desmond fanic.

btw good job.

Wow. This is just...wow. *Fans self* Very nicely done, I must say. My ownly complaint isn't even a complaint, and that is that I wish that this was longer. Maybe a continuation pf this after they escaped? I doubt that they could keep away from each other once in an area that is much safer than within Abstergo. Just a thought...

KEEP ON WRITING!

well done. I think you should do another one for AC2

Really nice. This chap would be a perfect start so...Are you going to turn this into something longer? :)

Thank you so much for this story! Desmond/Lucy is one of my favorite pairings and there are far too few stories about the two (especially too few with the appropriate amount of passion). Not only did you write it very elegantly, you made the chemistry between the two nearly tangible! Great job...can't wait to see more! :D

love it

I feel like this should be continued.

Simply because we don't have enough Desmond/Lucy fics out there and we need MORE.

Awesome work dude :) There just aren't enough Desmond/Lucy stories here (not as many as there should be), so this was real good and refreshing to read. Thanks for posting!

This was pretty good.

I like it! ;)