Perfect, poetically written, very well done indeed!.

nailed it...

I'll be short, hope you don't mind, this is perfect, it fits them, great job!

It fits them.

Thanks for writing & sharing.

"Then they came along.

Three little balls of light. Three little rays of hope. Haruno Sakura. Uchiha Sasuke. Uzimaki Naruto.

The words rang through his head like a relentless mantra threatening to throw off what little sanity he had left. Die. Die. Die. So much death in a span of so many little years, Kakashi, he was plagued."

The wording is utterly perfect. So telling. A great job at relaying his inner turmoil.

I doubt that they were all raindrops... I think he was pulling a 'Roy'.

-Ash

That was wonderful. Poetic and angsty. I love the description of all three. You can really feel Kakashi's deep sense of regret and the lingering survivors guilt. I love too, that it was Naruto who suggested staying in the rain. His character is so much more dependent on action, then by words, by nature. Beautifully written.

aaawww i think it's cute! and oh my god i rubb my face hard!

am i gunna get wrinkels now? im onley 14! nnnnnoooooooo!

I love the descriptions given out for each one of Kakashi's students. They hit the nail right on the head.

The way Kakashi blames himself for the loss of Sasuke was realistic and believable. As for the rain, it was a wonderful way to symbolize the internal suffering for all of the characters.

Wow you really know how to depress someone. Great style, very poetic.

Good work on this one, Seraphim. It was well-written.

this is good! you really feel the heartache of all three at the end , the longing for their lost member of team 7. thanks for posting :)

i really like that story! especialy the part where naruto and sakura come and see kakashi. great work! :)