I want to say how dare you, but at the same time I liked the fic sooo good job, but also *sobbing*

Wow! That was chilling and beautiful!

Ahh... Being buried alive... God, so terrifying... Ugh... Poor Mandy and poor Sam!

This was just...absolutely incredible to read. You captured both Sam and Dean so perfectly, especially for this period in the series. Favouriting! I'm only up to episode 6 of season 6, so I'm relatively new to the SPN fandom, but this was brilliant nonetheless :) I'm gonna go check out what else you've done...that doesn't include spoilers for me, of course.

Oh poor Mandy... she still end up died.
But at least her second husband get to 'found' her.

Poor Sam...
But i'm glad that there's Dean come to rescue him from feeling too much trapped...

Freaking Great !

God, this story is soo perfect I don't have words for it! Just read it, like, the fifth or sixth time and each time feels like the first time cause its so well-written and brilliantly thought-out

This was really good. The most heart breaking part was thinking about poor Dean having to watch Sam like that. That would be so horrible. Great story though, I was hooked

Awesome fic! I know it sounds bad, but I'm glad you killed Mandy. It's makes a much more realalistic story than "oh we saved the girl just in time!" They can't save everybody :/

Dang it. That was rough on all parties, wasn't it? Sam having to suffer through dying multiple times and Dean having to freak out about his brother dying before his eyes and then Sam getting there in time to get her out of the walls but Dean having been a minute too late on the burning thing and then she's dead and he's in a wall and then it starts all over again but with him for real this time and ahasldkhfewouhrlj.

You really should've written for the show. Or something. I think you have their characters more than the actual writers do.

Great story! I could see this actually being an episode!

Amazing! I absolutely loved it! You rock!

Awesome story. But heart-breaking. Sam gets her out alive for her to die any why. Dean is right about one thing. She didn't die a lone and her husband was able to put her to rest.

Hey, I've been haunting your stories for quite some time and I thought it was a bout time I left a review. I read this story ages ago but I didn't add it to my favourites or leave a review, it was so good though that it stuck in my mind and I've been searching for it for a while now. I was so excited when I found it again! D

I think that this is a fantastic story! _ I love how you have both Sam and Dean in character and have used realistic dialogue. I can definitely imagine the brothers saying most of the lines you have written them. I like how you have given the two original characters a background and their own personalities.

I also love how you have kept your plot mostly true to the Supernatural season 1 storyline; this could have easily been made into an episode for the first season and it would have made perfect sense. ) I like how you have deviated from the storyline too, like the fact that it was Mandy's father that burned on the ceiling instead of her mother. I don't know if this was a mistake or it was necessary for the story but you've got Mandy's age at 28, whereas all the other psychics have been the same age as Sam, but hey, Azazel said there were other generations so that could be the reason for the age difference. )

I really love how you have written Dean as Sam's anchor. I prefer hurt!Sam and protective/caring!Dean and you have written it beautifully. I am partial to the fact that you have hinted at the fact that Dean was more of a father to Sam than John was. I especially like this line: "He rocked her with experience borne from Dean." it just warmed me up inside. D Also, Dean singing to Sam to comfort him? I Love you! D

You write your descriptions so well. The imagery is just great! I can really picture some of the things that are going on in your story and the descriptions of Sam's pain whenever he has a vision made me wince in sympathy.

Your writing flows really smoothly, making it very easy to keep reading. Although I did spot one sentence that I had to stumble over to read but only because you unintentionally repeated yourself: "Sleep had swept away most of the cobwebs and pain, and with fresh clarity he scanned the dark terrain outside the car with fresh clarity. 'We here?'" ("Fresh clarity P). However, I loved it when you intentionally repeated yourself the "People only saw what they wanted to see" was a really nice touch to your story. I'm not sure if this was on purpose or not but you've kind of foreshadowed Dean's first death "He's glad she wasn't alone at the end. That's all I'd ask for if it were me." I think it's safe to say that I'm jealous of your writing skills. _ You're an amazing author! You should write the Supernatural episodes yourself! D Either that, or begin your own series. )

Well, thank you for writing and sharing your stories with us all on this site. Sorry for not reviewing before now and I apologise for the long review or any criticism if it has offended you.

-Ellie Jane Farrell _

This was really well thought out and put together. It was so sad that Mandy died, but sometimes they don't save everyone with what they do.

Really fine writing.