aww soo mushy XD... but its good

wow thats a record.. lemon in the first chapter BUT you managed to pull it off to... thats hardly ever done!..

You know the drill, short but sweet as hell. I need a trip to the dentist.

Thanks for the fanservice.

Love: Kris~

lol ichigo is officially perverted.. but I don't blame him, if Grimmjow walked in my room butt naked dripping wet I'd be the happiest woman alive.

I think it's a great idea to post the Ichi one, I'd like to see this from his POV.

This was freaking amazing, I love how you portrayed Grimmjow. He doesn't seem OOC at all. If this is a one-shot great job being your first story. If you are adding more to this I look forward to reading more, as well as anything else you write.

It wasn't bad, and they didn't come off too OOC because of how you build the story up. But I kind of was put off for a bit in the middle when all of a sudden this humour came into the picture. It didn't seem to fit with the story. In the beginning you wrote it as if it was a very serious story but then you changed the attitude of the writing. And I really liked how you wrote Grimmjow in the beginning and all, so it did put me off. Also it is quite short but that is fine. It really just was the humour-thing that I wanted to complain about a little. Otherwise it was fine and I enjoyed it.

About the same story but with Ichi's pov; I think you have to come to a conclussion yourself. Do what you want with it, if you think people will enjoy it, or you simply want to upload it, then you should )

This is fuckin' genious. I think I'm starting to like boy on boy action :)) Great job! Post more!