Can you please write more HP fanfiction? It's heart breakingly beautiful. I love it so much, it makes me cry. Can you continue writing HP? You seem really good at it.

'Three broken people is a lot for anyone to love.'
THIS BROKE MY HEART! *bawls eyes out* I-I'm s-so SAAAAAAD! *screams* WHY IS IT ALWAYS NEVILLE? WHY LUNA? And as for the quote above, I love it.
THis story is heart-breakingly beautiful.

Beautiful.
Just beautiful.

This is beautiful. You made me so sad every time Neville's hope was crush, and I could really imagine Luna sitting chirpily on her bed, dressed in a white hospital gown, sun streaming in the window, and Neville's heart just breaking again...

This was truly sweet! I really wish you'd keeping going with this fic! Amazing :)

Oh God, this is beautiful, and sad, and wonderful and I love it, I really really do. You've somehow managed to capture Neville, while making him completely different,and poor Luna, she's normal. Well that was a weird sentence, but whatever, it's Nostalgic, and that line from the receptionist "three broken people are quite a lot for anyone to love" is haunting, because really Neville deserves some sympathy as well, anyway, keep writing, thanks for posting,

Punk

This... is amazing. Heartbreakingly sad, but amazing. Incredible, unbelievable. And sad.

The way you portrayed Neville's emotions without saying too much, communicating it with just his heaviness, his same visits to St. Mungos... this is truly INCREDIBLE work.

Really, really truly.

So, wow :)

i loved it! congratulations, this is a fantastic fic. :) very original.

I found this story on someone's Favourite Stories list, and even though I'm not strictly a Neville/Luna fan, I found this extremely sweet and sad. Your writing style is perfect; it's smooth to the touch and melts like chocolate when read. There's hardly anything better than literature of that calibre, and I applaud your talent.

awww sad! what happened to Luna?

Awwwww - Very sweet

Aw, this actually made me cry, it was so touching! I think this story made me fall in love with Neville/Luna, it was just so sweet! I feel so bad for Neville in it though, you did a really good job at describing him and his emotions and it's probably one of the best one shots that I've read, I loved it! Keep up tue brilliant work,

~ evermorekisses

sweet and sad at the same time. love this pairing.

So I wasn't going to read this story (not usually a Neville/Luna fan), but the summery got me a little curious so I decided to peek at it.

I'm teary eyed. It's so heartbreaking and even with only a one-shot I really felt connected to the story and characters. You're very talented.

This was sad. It was also well written.