You wanted me to laugh and I did. Loved Ariadne's reaction to the whole thing and Cobb about the love triangle!

That was entertaining. :)

Of course, this isn't realistic, but since you didn't mean for it to be, I do agree that this is an amusing story idea. YOu still managed to keep everyone in character which is admirable.

Eames' childlike excitement: "We're famous!"

Ariadne's way of looking at things in a kinda serious manner: "Oh my God! I'm like a freakin whore!" Ariadne yelled in disgust, still scrolling down the page. "Ariadne and Arthur; Ariadne and Cobb; Ariadne and Eames? EW!" (lolol)

Eames' flirtiness: "I told you babe, the offer still stands." Eames winked.

Dom's protectiveness/father-like personality: "Knock it off." Cobb said, hitting him in the back of the head.

Write more!

"You didn't know?" Cobb pretended to be shocked. "Ariadne, Arthur, and I have a love triangle going. We'd include you but you're annoying."

YES. HAHA. Classic. Worst piece of shit? I thought it was pretty brilliant. I literally fell off my chair laughing. No exaggerations.

:) I couldn't stop laughing while I read this, and in all honesty I could see them all reacting like this to fanfiction. Thanks for the laughs.

this is really funny! love it!

"We'd include you, but you're annoying."

:D

This is so so so funny! Don't put yorself down; this is awesome!

WOW. Hilarious. I didn't stop smiling or laughing.

Hehehehehe, this was so perfect! So epic! So AWSOME! I LOVE stories like this!

"Freaky Watermelon videos"... I couldn't let that sit. Me being me I had to research what the heck he could be talking about- and than I came across a little youtubr vid called 'Watermelon nights-the meth minute 39' and decided that must be it. Well, that must be it unless you had something completly different in mind... :D

I loved their reactions to the whole pairings thing. Cobbs and his joke about their love triangle was priceless, along with his 'Arthur/Eames in the closet' comment. Also glad to see that one of them reacted positively to their pairings(well, except for Eames, but he's a perv like that...) I just could never see any of them paired.

Heh, and the whole Ari-slut thing... I noticed that. I guess with only one girl on the team it kinda comes to that. It's either the ff writers pair one of the team with her or the airplane stewardess... or I guess Mal, kinda sorta, which would be odd...

Heh, I bet they watch themselves for a while after this... Don't wanna seem like they have attractionsfor each other! Their next job shall be an awkward one... *thinks a story should be written about it just for the awkwardness*

Woah, didn't mean to ramble so much! _ your story was amazing and made me laugh. Hope you write more like this!

omj, this is awesome, please write more

XDDDDDDDD

ha..ha...ha..

"The offer still stands, babe." LOL! This was epictastic. LOVED IT.

HAHAHA.

"Oh my God! I'm like a freakin whore!" Ariadne yelled in disgust, still scrolling down the page. "Ariadne and Arthur; Ariadne and Cobb; Ariadne and Eames? EW!"

It certainly made me laugh :D

Been reading through a few of your other stories you've posted, and I like! Especially your characterisation skills; you really have that in the bag - able to write with the right personality for each character that features :)