| Reviews for That's What I Wasn't Expecting |
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   FadedSunset chapter 20 . 11/6/2012 Great story! You should write a sequel :) |
| QueenQuendya chapter 20 . 9/24/2011 Omg they kissed! Why did you let him go! Sigh. Maybe there will be more Apollo In the NeXT one? ;) please say yes, btw loved the story 3 |
| mashedpots101 chapter 20 . 9/17/2011 Please make a sequel!This was just like something id buy at chapters |
| LivesTooShort52 chapter 7 . 8/28/2011 OMG! I WAS BORN IN SANTA BARBARA, CA! Ok, now that that's out of my system... This is really good, but may you please add in another guy who likes Callie, because that'd bring out Apollo's jealous side. Or make her REALLY injured/ sick. IDK, just something different. Oh and also... what does Callie look like? |
| andy chapter 20 . 6/4/2011 enjoyed this story. is there a part 2? |
| PretendingToWrite chapter 11 . 5/14/2011 Wow. This was really good. If it wasn't a fanfiction I would totally buy this from Barnes and Nobles or something. Callie and Apollo's relationship is well done and realistic, the writing style is good and enjoyable to read, and um. Some other thing. Crap, I forgot. But- oh yeah, the characters weren't all mary-sueish. So continue writing, and yeah. I'll keep reading. Wow, that was a long review. |
| Stabbythings chapter 20 . 4/11/2011 Awesome chapter. |
| Irish-Shadowhunter chapter 20 . 4/10/2011 awwwwwww its over!*sob* loved story ! AWESOME!:D soooooooo sad its over but it was so GOOD!well since you cant give me pie i need to go find some... BYE!awesome story!btw |
| Someone wearing tie-dyed socks chapter 11 . 4/9/2011 So I already reviewed (about 5 seconds ago, actually) but I realized I wanted to include something else. Glory. That girl who shows up in chapter 11. There's never really much of a story one how she found Calixte or who paid her to steal the car. If you plan on doing a sequel (maybe from someone else's perspective), great! If not, WHY did you leave that part up in the air? It sounded like it was going to build into something, and I really hope it does, but please don't just leave it without explanation or re-mentioning. That's all. Great story, other than that bit. |
| Someone wearing tie-dyed socks chapter 20 . 4/9/2011 Really liked the story, especially the ending. It's so nice to NOT READ A GENERIC "LOVE" STORY. Thank you. Anyway, moving on. You might want to check the pronouns sometimes. It can be a little confusing who you're talking about. And the wording in general. But it was a good story, with good characters, plus Apollo. Who is just plain awesome. Keep writing :) |
| KitKat2014 chapter 20 . 4/9/2011 *mouth open* No i was so hoping for them to be together...i pray thats there will be a sequel. I love this story and keep writing |
| Apolloluver chapter 20 . 4/9/2011 I love this story(: Review soon please and don't wait for like a month or two to do it. Like a few day's at the least.. |
| Lady of Lochaber chapter 20 . 4/9/2011 Lol it was a good ending. Poor Apollo feel kinda bad for himthough... somehow he never seems to get the girl. But yeah sometimes we think we are in love with some people cause we say to our selves this is the kinda person we should go for. Or because we just wonder what it wouldbe like to be in love with them so i think its kinda fitting. Well if you like you are welcome to write about angle arse. Arse could have his favorite Armor stolen or his imortality. well if you want to write it and need somemore of angels friends just let me know and i send them you. |
| CrazyIrishGirl chapter 19 . 4/1/2011 AAAAAAAAHHHHH! Honey dis is amazin stuff!U wouldnt believe de amount of crap i had 2 read b4 i gt a halfway decent story about APOLLO who i tink is pretty awesome!Cant wait til u finish!Dont leave us fans hangin! is a cool heroine!Zany name! |
| Stabbythings chapter 19 . 3/8/2011 Awesome, I love it and it's complex and amusing |
