dude is the entirety of ch4 a tf2 reference?
thats amazing

Great story. Change of characters personalities make this story unique. My favorite part is that for all insanity characters make more reasonable choices than in canon. I especially like that Shinji was at least partially aware of his role to play from the beginning and that pilots knew truth about mothers. Some parts were tedious for me but I can't say that anything was unnecessary. Flashback of soldiers that found his first handiwork we see were confusing for me. Only after his identity was revealed I understand why this scene was added. Angels conversation were also hard to follow.

Gendo was my favorite character. His commercials were very entertaining and it is shame that we don't see more of them in later part of the story. Craziness was entertaining but it isn't reason why I like him so much. I really like how much he is good father even if he is restricted by situation and his bold and effective plans.

I really liked battles against angels at the end because each of main evengelions and its pilots had chance to shine. Battle against Zaruel and Tabris were really good but my favorite was whan 01 have freed itself from Leliel and obliterated Bardiel. It is my favorite because we see for the first time evangelion true power, overcome something that was obviously darkest hour and Gendo decided to put his trust into his son.

It's... It's beautiful

I'm just nitpicking here, but...

The Teams' names are full of wrongs and I must correct because it is my duty as an annoying person.
Especially since you've likely already been told that Scout's name is Jeremy (with no last name given), Soldier's first name is Jane, Heavy's name is Mikhail, and Sniper's last name is Mundy like a thousand times already.

That said, I like the names you've given them, so it's fine. See you when I review at the end

This...was definitely a drug trip. I should probably go and finish my homework now.

Damn...this was an amazing read. I should put this here just to tell people how amazing this is.

This is the greatest story I have ever read.
Thank you.
Good luck on future stories!

You did an excellent job of making Zeruel property awe inspiring and terrifying after all that had before him/her/it.

I found the irony of Rei taking the reverse of the Rebuild position in saving Shinji to be great, though it felt like Zeruel died a bit weakly at the end to a single Berserk EVA.

I applaud you sir.

Damn. Just damn.

Forget OTL Berserk Unit 01 against Zeruel, this is the real scene where Sin from Genesis should be olayong. You did very wel indeed at the build up, the intensity, and the climax.

Man, this story is incredible.

You manage to hold onto so many of the core and underlying themes of Evangelion while injecting thoughts of hope, joy, and hotblooded awesomeness.

The new, different ways the Angels make themselves a threat are fascinating? The way you present their existences and viewpoints, as well as the ancient history of ADAM and LILITH, are a delight to read.

The characters are well handled, with appropriate screen time, introspection, and well handled background/flashbacks.

And Pen Pen...damn. That touched me hard.

Wow! Asuka gone, Kawaru gone but Asuka has joined her Mom into the ether so to speak. the twists and turns in this story! Very enjoyable for me. I'm not too disturbed by variance from canon although this Asuka is 180 degrees different from the real Asuka in NGE story. I'm going to hate to see this end...

Let's be honest.
THIS should have been CANON all along.
Sure, it's just one chapter so far that I've read - but it's already Funnier In Hindsight.
I pretty much hate the actual Evangelion, so such deviations are kinda brilliant immediately, lol.

So much suspense and leaving questions and open ended events! I love your scene with Rei and Shinji embracing! That was truly we'll done, I can't wait to continue.

You know, I have truly enjoyed this story so far. BUT! Killing off Pen Pen was a little too much for me. I hope you haven't killed Rei, I have to give up. Great story though

A most interesting and entertaining twist to the original.