Reviews for The Only One
Guest chapter 35 . 2/19
Hey I know you haven’t updated it quite a while bit I just wanted to let you know how much truly enjoyed your story and that I hope you eventually come back to the story! Thanks!
kanna-yamamoto chapter 35 . 8/6/2019
Porfavor, termina esta historia. Está muy bien escrita y es maravillosa, necesito un final. Gracias.
D70dbf chapter 35 . 7/3/2019
Nice story hope things are going better
Ari-Skywalker chapter 35 . 9/9/2018
It’s a shame. It’s been 3 years since the last update!I love this story, and yet it feels like I will never get to see/read the ending of it
Demon-Angel-Princess chapter 35 . 6/13/2016
Update! Or have you given up on this? Because that is a true shame
baeleeh chapter 35 . 4/6/2016
no no no nononono dont stop here
Elvenprincess3019 chapter 35 . 12/29/2015
Don't let anybody make you feel bad about yourself... Take all the time you need. Your future is more important than anything... I am in the same boat as you right now and I promise you it will all work out. Don't worry!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2015
Please update its been almost a year!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
Oh my gods! Please update!
Luna Lightblade chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
First impressions, (Legolas was a valuable member of the Fellowship...but what if "he" had been a "she"? Genderbent Legolas Greenleaf. No slash, No Legolas-bashing, and NOT A MARY-SUE! Characters may be a bit OOC, however. Chapter 35 up - "The Paths of the Dead")

I haven't started reading yet, the introduction sounds interesting but the claim of "NOT A MARY-SUE" is slightly alarming. My first thought immediately goes to, so the character is going to be a watered down weakling? I've never understood how a role-playing term made its way into literature in the first place. Mary Sues don't really apply here, at least in my opinion. Does it really matter if the written character can smote their enemies with a sneeze, or is a beauty beyond belief, if the story is interesting? If you place that disclaimer to attempt to limit the flames and whining, I suspect you'll find its a futile effort. Better to write the story you envision rather than cater to those with the biggest mouths. -my opinion on it anyways-

My apologies if this bit of criticism isn't welcome, I see that thirty two chapters have already been written and I have no idea what yet awaits. I only offer this first impression because I disagree with the concern of Mary-sues. I've seen many potentially good story themes ruined because authors are too concerned on that.

Regardless, I look forward to finding out, and even if the story doesn't appeal to me I thank you for contributing and sharing your story with us.
sarah g chapter 1 . 5/10/2015
Please update its been forever!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2015
Oh my God, freaking update already please! Its been over 4 months since you left us on a damn cliffhanger which was so not cool by the way! So please, update!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Christ's sake, fucking update already! Don't mean to be rude, but its been months an you left us on a damn cliffhanger! I get that u have a life, but its been a long ass time and leaving your viewers on a cliffhanger is just not cool. So please add a new chapter soon!
kage-ryu14 chapter 35 . 2/13/2015
Please update this.
This is a really brilliant fem au and I'm really loving it. I thought I wouldn't like it and that it would become a fem mary-sue story but it hasn't. So please update and keep up the good work!
-Kage-ryu
alkdfsjis chapter 35 . 1/25/2015
If you do not update asap, I will personally find you. (Joking, of course:)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I want to know what happens to Elrohir and Cari! Update! Update! Update,
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