This is bloody hilarious! I love it! Definitely a favorite ;)

Mischief managed,

Rachel

lol harry and ginny arent gonna get grandkids i guess :P

Wow, this is great. So funny! And you captured the feeling of listening to a real story perfectly. Also i liked the last line :). Just out of curiosity, was Gabrielle intended to be male or female? (I have slash on the brain)

oh my god that was hilarius! and even thugh im not a big fan of fem slash, that last line was a brilliant one!

Tooza.

Hahahaha, this was wonderful!

Oh. Em. Gee. Lily's narration was absolutely hilarious - and I totally didn't see the end coming, but then I, like, collapsed into a fit of giggles. I wonder what the heck Harry and Ginny have been feeding their children to get them to all come out gay . . . ;)

So sweet, though. Yay for Teddy and James, and I loved the detail about the cheering charm and apparition and how they had to profess their love all over again, blah, blah, blah:)

I can't tell you how endearing Lily was So funny and charming and wonderful.

GREAT job! Very well-written!

Squid

I laughed so hard I almost cried.

:')

The last line.

This story-

THECOWBOYBOOTS.

lessthan3 this into oblivion.

Ha! XD The entire Potter-Lupin family is gay! Loved it, had me laughing all along (who needs homework? Having a laugh is so much better!)

Genious!

I love the way how you told this!

There aren't many stories like this and it's a welcomed refreshment!

That's hilarious. I love it. Ridiculously funny. Had to stop half way through (I know-the story's so short it's hard to, but I had to go do housework) and i came back and it was really good-fantastic. Loved it :)

CKC

Now that was awesome! I love the whole way it was written and how funny it was! Great work dude! Keep up the good writing!

OMG! ROFL! That was brilliant! That last line of Lily's nearly killed me!

haha! Loved it! You did a really good job making sure it was explained how they were on the beach. No details, but we got the point. And I loved how you made ALL of them gay. xD

So much for Harry and Ginny having grandkids. :)

Ha ha! I love this! And the last line? xD HA! Great. l love it.