good job

This story is great! I reaaly liked the part about Fenrir's first transformation and his parents. Plz make this story into a two-shot! It would be awesome!

That was a really good telling of how Remus became a werewolf! I love how you made Greyback and Remus' father friends when they attended Hogwarts. Just a few minor mistakes that I found. You spelled "definitely" as "defiantly" a couple of times, and if Greyback wasn't transformed when he bit Remus, he wouldn't have become a full-fledged werewolf. I'm not pointing those out to be mean, I just personally love constructive criticism. Other than those few things it was really great! And I think adding another chapter on the hospital scene would be awesome. :)

I can't believe you only got one review for this. It was fantastic! I especially enjoyed the dialogues between John and Greyback, at the beginning. You can really feel that they know each other. Well done!

This was really good i liked it a lot!