Reviews for Serpentine
HoneyBear84 chapter 32 . 6/28
Loved it
Wolvie26 chapter 32 . 10/23/2019
Love it!
brebre99 chapter 1 . 8/3/2019
Amazing
PrettyInPink1515 chapter 2 . 5/3/2019
I like your story so far! I would suggest a beta to help you grammar wise. Your story needs a bit of editing. On to chapter 3!
Camro chapter 32 . 12/10/2018
Great story ! I am gonna check the sequel
Alec Goodman chapter 32 . 8/1/2018
love this story goung to read Viper now!
cabbieforhire chapter 29 . 4/30/2018
Kinda hope Hermione gets called out by someone who's not so willing to forgive and forget, especially when there's been no consequences. Even if she broke up with Ron she immediately got together with a famous Quidditch player who bends over backwards for her, she didn't have to worry about finding a place to stay even though what started her downward spiral was being a freeloader and everyone is congratulating her and backing her up.
cabbieforhire chapter 27 . 4/30/2018
Hermione shouldn't be forgiven so easily just because she and Ron broke up. She was stupid and entitled and this turn around makes no sense. At the very least Harry should distance himself from her, not cater to her. It was bad enough he bought her things when she was still with Ron. She's never going to learn if she knows nothing will ever happen to her.
HarryFanficLover chapter 32 . 5/13/2017
I loved the fanfic. very detailed description of the scenes are the most i loved.
Raeshi chapter 31 . 5/12/2017
Great story. I like Harry and Charlie together. Ginny is crazy, so is Molly.
jadinoue chapter 8 . 3/13/2017
7
Yeniferg132 chapter 32 . 3/20/2016
Love this. It was cute and I was so into the book that I lost track of time(which was good and bad). Thank you for making it and I hope you make many more. -An admirer
SorrySucker19 chapter 3 . 2/19/2016
They're are SO many editing mistakes. I love the idea of the story, but did you even go through the work a second time? I think the potential is there for an AWESOME story, but the writing could use some work. Also, this isn't meant as a flame. Constructive criticism is all I'm doing. From one fanfic author to another.
spk chapter 31 . 1/6/2016
Fantastic story! Love the way you handled Harry & Charlie's characters with all of the controversy. :)
miu.sakurai.73 chapter 32 . 12/31/2015
gracias! fue una interesante historia!
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