It stopped. It was so good.

W_WHY?

No... Just Axel/Demyx please. _

LOVE IT! w It's Axel by the way!

Write more please and I'm sure youll do fine on the yoai!

Demyx/Axel/Zexion

Nu, threesomes are weird O_o plus Axel and Demyx are waaaaay better on their own _ tell Zexion to GTFO XD

That was good update soon I wanna see more.

And please keep zexion away make him go emo and kill himself. And no roxas please k thanks

*opens Axel's door to yell in the hallway*

GO DIE ZEXION!

I chose Demyx/Axel

Threesomes are just awkward... At least for me to write lol.

Love itttttt! *drools*

Write mooooore!

~Darke

Don't kill yourself Zexy! Threesome! *grins* How naughty. Yes do it! Zexy/Demy/Axel.

pwex contiue the story and for once ppl notice the fact that they never put that they closed the door so anyone could see what theu are doin and it should be Axel and Demyx then off somewhere else Zexion and Marly (everyone knows he's gay and would f*** anything even a short emo kid

ooo, Zexy mad. oh well Dem and Ax are so much hotter together anyway.

Nice to see someone reads my stories XD *coughcough*Untouchedismystory*cough* I'm loving this~ 3 nice work _

OMG plz make more this was so good i loved it ill die without it u wouldnt want that would you (lol from the fic)

Hope you post a new chapter soon!

you stole my cupcake analogy D:

mwahahaha my analogies are taking over fanfiction! MWAHAHAHA*cough* okay. Now for my ACTUAL review:

Awesome. I love that song. I love it even more now. ;P

I liked the story and your writing is really good, but you capatalized a few words you shouldn't have. (My inner grammar snob :x hehe)

BUT

I liked it :3 More chapters?

~Darke