At the same time that I am thinking that the ending is brilliant, I am cursing you for killing L.

Love this! It's an absolutely amazing story. :)

That was so beautiful. You truly are a wonderful author. It's 2am and here I am sobbing my eyes out over this story, which has not happened yet for any story. Actually, I really don't cry for anything. So be proud on that fact alone. But, thank you. That was absolutely wonderful. :')

You have no idea, of how hard, HOW HARD, I cried. The end was very sad, How could you? oh god It's 3 in the morning here and I'm crying over an unexistent character's death. Again. I love your fic, really... but WHY? well... I can't do anything about it, unfortunately. So... yeah I'm goig to cry myself to sleep lol xD
English is not my first language, so excuse any mistake.

awesome!

I'm really liking the story so far, I'm surprised you don't have anymore reviews for it. I like Jenny's character and how she does have flaws. She gets angry too quickly and acts irrational somtimes.

One thing that's bothering me though is their fights. It's starting to seem like your basing their relationship on break up and make up. Why does Jenny have to forgive so easily? She seems stubborn so why does her easy forgivness go against her personality? And L goes and says sorry all the time. One, doesn't he get frustrated by that? Doesn't he want to just sit down and let her brood, because she's seeming to become a liability to the case. Two, why is him that has to apologize? If I were in L's situation I would've given up apologizing all the time and have her come to me.

You're story is good, but the fighting with them, and knowing how to predict how the fight will turn out is beginning to get irritating.

It's really good apart from the grammar and punctuation o.o

So I edited what you've done so far and edited it and it was AWESOME 3

You're a really grand writer apart from that though. Really really good! Oh and more description of characters would be good, too. How they look etcetera. Just for future reference~

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OMG! *depressed* Ugh... I'm in pain!

I have been reading this story now for the past couple days, and I must say it's brilliant. I definetly have enjoyed it so far! Please update soon!

No, no, no, no, NO! You best not be planning to kill no L. Girl, I will cut you

DON'T KILL L! I swear to All that is holy I will die if L doesn't get to live happily ever after with Jenny. It's called fanfiction because you can have happy endings (remember that when you write up the next few chappies)

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Awww they are so cute :3 I can't wait to see where you take this, I REALLy hope L doesn't actually die :( sigh oh well Author's choice, but yeah Please Update soon! :D

awwww! That was so cute! Update soon! please! XD

Don't make her forgive so easily in the next chapter!:) make him work for it. Loved it by the way

Aw, this is a funny chapter.

I suppose everything's a bit slow at this point, but I can't wait to see how the Yotsuba arc turns out. Update soon!

Poor Light even his back account isn't safe!