Reviews for Chuck Vs Baby Bartowski
baldcoder chapter 5 . 8/13/2016
Nice story so far.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/28/2014
Wow! This is a very good story. Very well written, exciting plot, and formatted almost as if it was a Chuck episode! I hope you update soon :) (But sadly I noticed you haven't updated since 2010) ):
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6/2013
Please continue this story
Charahftw chapter 5 . 11/9/2010
Hey, since i am a die-hard-romantic and Chuck/Sarah ultimate supporter and fan i think that you should write say 5-6 more chapters of how they announce the news and how everyone takes it. More importantly Ellie sees the conflict clearly and there could be a Sarah/Ellie scene where Ellie is really worried what will Sarah do in order not to break Chuck's heart (not that we dont know what will be said) yet it feels kinda comforting when it is written within the storyline. Food for thought, what about Beckman saying that they should keep the baby but with the sole purpose of becoming a Intersect successor to Chuck. Team Baartowski will find about it, will fight about it and eventually make a deal they are not bothered any more. Thus there could be a Chuck/Sarah happy ending with a adorable, AWESOME, cute child.
Selumgirl chapter 5 . 11/4/2010
This is great!

I was speciifically looking for this kind of Chuck&Sarah story, because I was curious of how to make it work, and I think you nailed it, especially with Sarah's feelings towards her pregnancy. If there would be anything to make Agent Walker crack (besides Chuck dying), it would be a baby...

Keep it up!
TheContamination chapter 5 . 9/4/2010
LOVES!

.Soon.

I love this!

It's cute, dramatic, involves Chucks babies, and is in general

A-maz-ing. Update soon :D
gg123 chapter 5 . 8/16/2010
cool story can't wait for more
Tynianrex chapter 5 . 8/10/2010
Just fluff enough...
Ghost in the Machine chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
Sorry, you pressed a major button of mine with this one. Ellie, for all that she loves her brother and for all of her friendship with Sarah, GETS ABSOLUTELY NO SAY on whether or not Sarah has an abortion. That's between Sarah and Sarah. While others may have an opinion and even influence, the final say is Sarah's. Because if it isn't, I must have missed the part where Roe v. Wade was overturned or where Sarah was enslaved.
lightthief chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
I think this was just the right amount of fluffy! :) :) I totally love this story! Requests: Please try to make the chapters longer... I kind of want some story, something like the meat in a writing piece...this last chapter seemed really short...but the story is still good so keep it up! 3 Chuck ;)
chelabella chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
this is a great story ! the only thing is i wish the chapters were longer ...update soon :D
mama5433 chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
Great chapter I can't wait for the next one !
jinxed97 chapter 5 . 8/7/2010
Great chapter...
coreymon77 chapter 5 . 8/7/2010
First thing, there is no such thing as too fluffy. Such a thing does not exist. I love fluff and can never get enough of it.

I would definitely like some more cuteness for Chuck and Sarah, but as long as I know that it is coming, I should be alright. Try not to make it too dark, angsty and brooding though, alright?

Other than that, great chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep it up and update soon!

until next time,

coreymon77
aupnaahh chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
awesome! :D
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