Love it! I'm glad it wasn't all fluff, kinda "ohh, I like him but I don't wanna tell him" and "ohh I like her but I don't wanna tell her", I think you kept up woth their characters well and it was lighthearted, I really enjoyed it, well done! Definitely gonna check out your other work :)

I haven't read this pairing before I normally favour Arthur/Ariadne but you've made it work so well. This chapter ended with a major cliffhanger - I hope you can update as I'd love to see what happens next!

Quick thinkin', Ariadne!

This has been an awesome story! Please post the last chapter soon - I can't wait to see what happens!

Aacccchhh... A chapter full of action ending on this!
I REALLY want the next chapter, but since it might be the last, I'd rather it was GREAT than quick.
So, finish those edits and make it memorable. THEN post.
Can't wait!

Favorite line: "Trusting him with the burden of her affection felt... right." It is a perfect insight into her heart - she had been scared of getting hurt, now she trusts him with that burden.

And I love it that Eames doesn't want a one-night-stand; a measly three months is "shoddy" to him.

Love the depth!

Insight into mazes and forging was captivating, but not nearly as much as the human interactions were. I'm truly beginning to love Eames; for him to understand that knowledge of the faults in a person is necessary for true liking shows more character depth than I imagined he had. And I love it that he's ahead of Arianna in this. He is making it clear that he is not a fair-weather friend, Ariadne's biggest fear.

But the fun of the forging and teasing can't be denied - to see yourself winking at yourself would be just as unsettling as Arianna saw it. LOVED the whole thing!

I love the CHEMISTRY between Eames and Ariadne.., I love their STORGIC relationship or somethin'., Love their PLAN., and I like the inside joke (The PERSOPHONE part xD) I was LMFAO.. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter! I loved seeing Ariadne in action, and definitely loved the mention of the impossible cubes. You go, dream weaver girl. Whatever edits you had to do to this chap - they were worth it! Great all around. Is this going to be the second to last? I can't believe the story's almost over!

Well, this was full chapter - and the best so far.

The breakfast was challenged by Eames' integrity of all things - really insightful to see.

The time in the museum was pure fun, interesting, and authentic.

And the confession was startling - and seems to have exposed Eames' soul. We get what makes him tick - and Ariana does too. The trust they just built in each other is clear

WONDERFUL interaction!

I love it that we are beginning to learn more about how dreaming works and more about the actual job via the prep for it. Nicely done!

And I love it that we get to watch their friendship deepen as they work and basically just have fun together.

AND I love it that the Forger Eames, who would always be curios about motivations, is affected by Ariadne's loyalty. Great stuff!

Eames, ever the Forger who excels at his work, loves observing people in uncomfortable and unusual situations - hence he delights in putting Ariadne in situations where he can watch her squirm. And, of course, perceptive Ariadne figures that out... which only increases the fun.

CREATIVE dream! Love it!

Again, the perception between the two of them is realistic, insightful, and engaging. I love it that she's deeper than just being an easy mark for his bed. A "friendship" (ala Harry and Sally) between two very different but perceptive people sounds entrancing!

The honest insightful banter is captivating.