Reviews for Firepaw of SkyClan |
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MintyFlameBerry chapter 21 . 7/1 I think Tigerclaw let Stonetooth kill Flamekit because Flamekit looked like Pinestar, besides the kittypet part! |
SilverMoonstone-1 chapter 17 . 5/3 cats don't really sniff the air they open their mouth and taste the air. they have an organ called the vomeronasal sac which is placed behind their teeth on the roof of their mouth. they do that to identify smells. |
DragonaWolves chapter 21 . 4/1 why did you stop on a cliffhanger did you lose if so I will be sad. |
AnonymouslyMe chapter 21 . 1/2 I love this story a lot. It did get a little confusing in this chapter though. When Fallowpelt and Firestorm were talking. I forgot that Blackbird and Blackflower were two separate cats. |
Shadowwolf1997 chapter 21 . 9/25/2019 ah don't leave it like this Dovefeather is still mad at Fireheart I got to know how that goes |
Shadowwolf1997 chapter 8 . 9/25/2019 So smudge is now Scorchpaw… you know I'm loving this au more an more |
Runereader of the Nightwings chapter 1 . 9/18/2019 You somehow predicted a canon SkyClan Warrior. Hawkwing. Props where Props due. |
FaeGhostReader chapter 21 . 4/4/2019 This is sooo good. I want more! |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/25/2019 Fireblaze wold be the best to me but Firestorm is a good desicion |
queen lovX chapter 2 . 10/16/2018 Ok so I was wondering who the new Sandstorm would be and I was thinking it would be one of the girls but no Now it think it's lightningpaw He's acting like Sandstorm at the beginning of into the wild and I love I love my gay son lightningpaw |
Honeyfrost chapter 1 . 4/25/2017 That makes sense because SkyClan's old territory (the Twoleg place) would have been quite different to the other territories. |
C chapter 18 . 10/29/2016 Hey Ps Spottedleaf actually has Skyclan origins, in Firestar Quest they pointed out that Spottedleaf looked like Birdflight's, Cloudstars mate from ancient Skyclan, kits. Also she even gave Leafstwr or Leafdapple at the time a life, plus in on part I believe it even said she had strong legs and was good at jumping. |
Guest chapter 7 . 10/4/2016 OMFG SMUDGEIS TRAINING TO BEA WARRIOR!WHAT!? |
Ruru chapter 4 . 3/28/2016 Shouldent tigerclaw/star be there? If i remember correctly his ansestors are from there |
VolcanicPizza chapter 21 . 3/14/2016 Please write another chapter soon, it would make me very happy. Thanks! |