Hahaha! My bf loves DDR

I know about Duke's scars! Yay Tip of Blade

I like how you describe the team and their auras. Did you have this posted individually at one point? Cuz I've read it before by itslef

*Rolls eyes* 'New' not 'knew'. God, I need to check more thoroughly for typos lol.

Absolutely made my day too. This is why I always check back here, always hoping to read something knew from my favourite authors on ths forum. I love your flashes of life and this last one is just as good as all the rest. Please, always keep updating. Love your stories so much.

haha... that made my day... thanks for putting up a new chapter cause, this was hilarious! at first when I heard betrayal I thought "Oh god, this chapter is gonna put Nosedive as Stephen from the greatest freakout videos..." haha

I am in love with your portrayal of these two brothers. The interactions are spot on and sweet yet realistic. ("You sound like a little kid.") Total brother right there. Wildwing can be difficult to capture at times because he can act like an elder brother one minute and then have an almost paternal sense to him the next and I think you capture that well. I especially love the inner reflection of WildWing when Dive lays on his lap.

One thing I loved about the series was the devotion not only of WildWing to Nosedive but also vice versa. This episode in particular "Phil in the Blank" really worked well for that and your addition to it is incredible.

I thoroughly have enjoyed these short "slices of life" and I deeply hope you will give us more.

I am so happy to see you still updating! I've gone through and read your stories throughout the archive and love them!

Your collection is excellent, the characters exactly as they are in the show. My favourites are the ones between Wildwing and Nosedive, especially the first. Please, please, please keep updating. You're too good at it not to.

Cheers, MD

This is very well written. I agree with the candle colors & ur way of matching them to the team.

I am so overjoyed that the fandom is still alive...you have no idea how happy reading your fic has made me. I couldn't believe something for MDTAS had a recent update...

For the writing itself, I enjoyed it immensely. Your style is clear, straight-forward, and enjoyable. You do fantastic with characterization, everyone feels natural, and I think you bring a life to the characters that wasn't there in other fics I've read elsewhere.

I do hope you continue to update. This is an excellent collection.

Great chapter! I think you're right on about Wildwing. This seems exactly like something that he would be concerned about. He always seems so tough and in control in the shows, but there are moments when you just know how worried he is about Nosedive. I think you've really captured the struggles and concerns that Wing and Dive go through as brothers.

I like your short stories. Please continue.

i totally like agree with you Jordan Li Riley,i also love ch. 2 that both mallory/ nosedive have a connection to each other that they both had an older brother and not realizing that theyre both younger siblings. I cant wait for ch. 5. My opinion were, maybe nosedive/mallory will hang out and make out together because im a romantic fan of nosedive/mallory. Hee hehe!

nice. last chapter almost got me choked up.

Great stories! Did you pull chess from that one episode where Mallory and Grin are playing off to one side of the screen? And I really like the connection that Nosedive makes about him and Mallory both being younger siblings.